artois well done man, must say that i liked it, sounds positive.

Cool track with good potential, might be a bit too long for me though...

Fantastic bass and percs mate! I like that right from the start there's this definite feel of class with those crisp percs and FX, although the reverse clap sounded a touch loud. The melody that comes in during the first break is very distinctive and while it's not really my cuppa tea it's certainly the kind of riff that will stick out in a set, it stayed in my head for about an hour haha. I kinda got what Viber is saying, 8:15 isn't that long by club standards but the melody seems to play for long periods at once, maybe ration it out a bit more so its more of a "treat" lol.

Main lead synth with the portamento is cool, reminds me of the classic lead from Moogwai - The Labyrinth which I loved back in the day, although maybe yours could do with a touch more reverb for atmosphere. I'm an uplifting addict though so you should probably ignore that :P

Look forward to hearing more like this, good job!

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Last edited by novastorm on Feb-22-2010 at 04:22

Thank you all for the feedback I appreciate it and im glad you enjoyed it . Nova i fixed some of the issues with the mixdown and got a proper master on the track from my friend so it should sound good now. I however am sick and can hardly hear out of my left ear so I can't fully tell. Let me know if you can tell a difference.

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Really nice percs youve got going here man, I think the kick could be a bit more resy tho. Good melody you've here, and I really like the white noise adds "sizzle". Overall the track has some really nice percussion, it shows you took some time on them.

Nice job man