> great great percussion from the beginning to the end.
> that little synth is nice at the beginning
> nice uplifting melody around 1:17, i think the sound is too basic tho.
> awesome synth layering.
> break is calm and cool and uplifting at the same time as is the global atmosphere of the track.
> general mixing is very very good ! well done. mastering looks decent.
oh, and i love your style . will be cool to hear more stuff from you.
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Dec-12-2004 16:35
soundrush
aka Charlie Brownz
Registered: Mar 2004
Location: In A Loop
thanks mane and staticblue for feedback.
at staticblue: yes, that sound at 1.17 sounds kinda basic. i added it finally when the whole tune was finished to spice things up. actualy i see that it needs some rework. im glad you like my style
any more comments?
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Dec-12-2004 17:52
Trazedict
[feed me prog]
Registered: Feb 2003
Location: chicago
this is really energetic. i like it. those kind of flutting synths that move up and down really get me beautiful track. theres that small little glimpse of a synth at 3:20 that just makes me smile. love that thing. 4:15 it gets very good.
only thing i can suggest is add some more percs?
otherwise very professional sounding tune!
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Dec-12-2004 18:22
Klangzentrum
laidback'd&blow-job'd
Registered: Dec 2003
Location: Bielefeld
nice one, dude!
i really like your track! good synths and mastering...
Dec-12-2004 20:36
dEEkAy
Guest
Registered: Not Yet
Location:
sounds nice
arp got a lil of that binary finary feel with the flanger hehe
the cut @ 5:08/09 is a lil too hard it think.
Maybe some FX or delay or less filter would fix it. dunno.
could be a personal matter of taste, too, so dont bother too much with that
Dec-12-2004 20:47
Massive84
Old Relic
Registered: Jul 2003
Location: Sequence Realm
Nice job man!
you made this much better than the last time i heard the snip.
I stil prefer distant galaxy more than this
Now your using VST again, you should try to make some more original sounds and move to prog .
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Dec-13-2004 19:58
soundrush
aka Charlie Brownz
Registered: Mar 2004
Location: In A Loop
glad you guys like my tune, thanks for feedback
matthew. i have to admit that the crossing at 5.09 sounds kinda abrubt. think it would be best to add another short break. im still planing on that.
trazedict. im not very good with percs therefore i prefer to keep them as they are. nah, still working on that song. percs will be reworked definitely.
Dec-13-2004 20:04
soundrush
aka Charlie Brownz
Registered: Mar 2004
Location: In A Loop
quote:
Originally posted by Massive84
Now your using VST again, you should try to make some more original sounds and move to prog .
this is rather an excursion to fruityloops. im still working with reason but fruity means much more fun to me. both programs have their appeal.
maybe i will do some prog in the future, at the moment it tops my skills.
Dec-13-2004 20:33
tylerc
wannabe ballaz
Registered: Nov 2004
Location: MN USA
sounds really good man. nothing really bad to say at all. loved the synths at 3:20. i really like the sweeping ts404 arpeggio you used too.