this is a new track ive been working on for a few weeks now on and off. the breaks are kinda shittie and distored mostly due to the amount of elements in them i need to eq that area better. but its an attempt at making a faster paced track so tell me what you think about the elements and shit. its not an omfg track just a little something ive been working on. most will probly think its rather shittie and im sad to admit im going to agree but would like some feedback or advice on it.

so here it is
bitrate: 192k
time: 4:28

LINK TO THE FUCKEN TRACK

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well the tune was melodic but a advis don override with the bass. becase it wash all over the percusions and melody. well i like it but you can do it further if put the volume a little lower because to first kill the chanses to get a distorted sound if that it is that you dont want to add. But you are doing a great work. Keep up the good work man.

§=o) snowave