Come on guys?
Lots of viewings but no feedback?

How am I supposed to improve?

hey chap

will give ya some feedback just before i head to sleep...

the bass needs a lot of attention... sounds like it's clashing with the kick drum

percussion is pretty basic, as is much of the track

dont know how long you've been producing, but stick at it !

nice pads

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Originally posted by solus hey chap will give ya some feedback just before i head to sleep... the bass needs a lot of attention... sounds like it's clashing with the kick drum percussion is pretty basic, as is much of the track dont know how long you've been producing, but stick at it ! nice pads

totally agree with him, pads were very nice but the drums clash a bit.

Give the drums more of a groove and I think you've got something. Try a 2-beat phrase using some hats/snares/rides/reversehats, etc. Nothing too fancy, just need to get away from the BOOM chicaBOOM chicaBOOM self-destructive loop. Pads are awesome, would love to hear them in hifi stereo quality. The kick is almost too phat for this type of track, I'd try picking more of a clicky one with really short decay, and playing with the bassline to match it. I think you're on to something here -- just keep working at it until you realize it's 4:00 AM and you have to be up at 5:30 Good job so far, let us know when there's an update.

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A track I'm currently working on.

Ok guys, Ive took onboard your views and change a few things-

Ive changed the percussion dramatically, ive enhanced the pads (seeing as everyone likes them!), and ive also give you more of a taster of the full track, seeing as someone said it was boring!
I think when you hear more of it you wont think its boring (hope not anyway!)

More feedback please!!!


**NEW UPDATE**

MP

Last edited by MessiahProject on Mar-28-2005 at 15:12

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Originally posted by MessiahProject Ok guys, Ive took onboard your views and change a few things- Ive changed the percussion dramatically, ive enhanced the pads (seeing as everyone likes them!), and ive also give you more of a taster of the full track, seeing as someone said it was boring! I think when you hear more of it you wont think its boring (hope not anyway!) More feedback please!!! **NEW UPDATE** MP

this is hott! sounds a lot better! I still think the bass is a bit much (maybe my volume is up to high). The treble is to high during the vocals in between 2:20-2:35

Great Beat - I definitely wanan add the finished product to my music collection.

keep it up!

I would definitely add the finished

nice stuff.
hehe the vocals sounds great
i wanted to make a remix of that track but try contacting the band and asking them the accapela.

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Originally posted by Elujin Great Beat - I definitely wanan add the finished product to my music collection. keep it up! I would definitely add the finished

Thanks Elujin - thats a great thing to hear!
Still needs work - not the best at mastering yet, but still learning all the time.
At least I know you like the idea.

MP

messiah, you done an ok job mate, nice pads and keys. just that bassline needs tidying up a bit

i just absolutly adore this track anyway....and if there was an acapella of this somewhere i would die to get my hands on it

sounds nice id change up the percussion a bit maybe add in some breaks after the vocals but defintaly sounds like your on to something. and change the pads and synths some or add more layers as it progresses becuase it doesnt really change too much

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