listening...

starts out nice.. good static effects.. the clap is way to weak.. melody sounds ok, the whole things sounds a little out of structure.. i liked the melody much after a while.. very original and good.. like it much.. it sounds very hypnotic.. but i think the percussions could be more upfront.. maybe add some more, and maybe a conga loop or something.. u are really on to something with this lead for sure..

7+/10

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Listening to the track right now. Nice kick with nice high end. The clap indeed is a bit weak and muffled.

Nice melodybuilding towards the break. Listening to the break now.... very very nice and soothing. Soundquality is not all that good though. try to work on your EQ'ing to let the melodies stand out a bit more and try to work on getting some nice treble.

The stringspads could perhaps be a bit more reverby. The track sounds a bit flat. The hihats could use a bit more volume.

Overall the track is when I look at the build up, break and leadsection really well produced. And really what a wonderful lead mate! It is indeed a bit hypnothising.

Good effort! Try to get more soundquality and master the track right.

Cheers,

Nomen Nescio

i personaly like the percussion, great job on that, the pads are nice and soft which is great. The bassline is good, and the mood is soft. I dont mind the lead, its good, but im not wild about it like the others. I think overall the track has a nice chill feeling to it, but wasn't really expecting it to go the direction it did from the intro...

Thanks for the comments guys. I have uploaded a better mix (keep in mind that it's a 128k wma file) and will use your input for further versions of this track. (i know, mastering my tracks is not my strongest point )

Any more comments/suggestions?

Last edited by Romi on Apr-04-2005 at 23:17

Hi,

You can find a hq and improved vesion at this adres(192k) :

http://www.sitesled.com/members/rom...d%20Silence.MP3

Let me know what you think of this version.

hey, mate

another good work from you

the melody is cool as always, good effects, i like the percussion aswell, the clap is a bit weak still, though, needs a bit better eqing

overall, good work mate

keep it up!

cheers,

Peter

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nice bass drum.

bass OK. Maybe turn it up a tad.

.42 awesome distorted rhythm. down & dirty.

1.10 phasing pads are good.

1.59 bass drum song. song feel a little empty

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2.45 its a good break now. pads & bass go well

3.00 interesting pads. I like it.

3.30 kewl.

4.15 im digging this. You could even add a higher subtractor/malstrom matrix rhythm here. Dont need to add anymore pads, it's pretty dam full hehe.

5.30 song whinding up already?? I reckon you could make it go on for a bit long & have a grand finale or something


I drew a line in my post to show you where I got fulling into your track. Great work Romi.

Xeno.

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Thanks for the reply's, really apreciate it.

I like this track also, won't really detail my self, i just like it

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