Hey,
Listening ...... Intro, nice pan there, Build up it's kinda conventional but it does the job good, bass is too dry and plane imo.
Nice thing at 1:50, ur snare/clap should be louder and I would add a Reverb Predelay, it sounds missing when all the synths appears though.
In overall, is a nice tune, I just would work a bit more the sound because right nows sounds kinda Flat/Plane, but is a good work keep it up .
Kopi =o.

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Thanks! well this track isn't mastered yet
I'll work on it in a short time

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Holy crap...Kopi said all the things that I was gonna say.
The pan is great..but the bassline needs some presence.

I really loved the arping stereo lead/pad that you had come in there. Really widens the track up.

Like Kopi says, the clap needs work. Looks like you've got this thing layed out perfectly...now just need to do the tweaking and fiddling with getting it mixed down!

Good job and good luck bro!

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Originally posted by Digital Aura Holy crap...Kopi said all the things that I was gonna say. The pan is great..but the bassline needs some presence. I really loved the arping stereo lead/pad that you had come in there. Really widens the track up. Like Kopi says, the clap needs work. Looks like you've got this thing layed out perfectly...now just need to do the tweaking and fiddling with getting it mixed down! Good job and good luck bro!

Thankx I've got a question: How could I get more presence on my bass? Should I just make it louder? Or even more fat?
Well, the mixing/mastering.. it takes a long while...
I'm not really good in remixing tracks, it was just one of my several tries (but one which I most liked)
So, well if you like to listen to more tunes, just visit my website and see the crap I mastered there ^^^ (<= There are only premastered track previews online, so don't get shoked because of my album, it's mastered... And it took over 3 month doing it)

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