Hey,
Listening ... Nice Bass, solid, the build up is a bit Basic though and Techny, plus ur Crashes are a bit loud imo.
In overall, is going good, you just need to work a bit more on it, above all the levels, some sounds are to high in comparision with the rest, a big plus is that the Track itself it's pretty clean.
Good Work .
Kopi =o.

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Hi, thanks for that.

So you think the structure and all is ok?

Hi - listening now...

The start sounds very electro and techy. Yeah, cymbal crash it too loud... needs a gated reverb on it methinks. Not a fan of the mini crash rolls either. Infact, try getting rid of those cymbals and using reversed cymbals instead. It'll sound much better.

Theres a good variation of synths in there. I quite like the melody you have going at 1.56. Not bad at all. The darker change at 3.07 is pretty cool too. You could probably work on the buildups a bit more. Like the one at 5.14 builds up with a fair drumroll and a funky swoosh but then just dies after it.

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Thanks for your comments