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Listening ......Intro Bass sounds a bit weak, should be a bit louder imo, mmm nice this is beginign to sounds progressive to me . Cool at 1:58 , Bass should have a lil more of efects it sounds kinda planebut does strings kinda dont works for me, they keep doing the same thing almost without variation, but that's just me :P.

Ahhhhhh 3:52 it's very cool, liked the change, good job there .
In overall, you need to work out a bit more the buildup, also try adding some effects to the Bass, imo I would try other Bass lines during the track also, good work mate keep it up .
Kopi =o.

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great melodies, production is lacking a bit though. you need to beef up your tracks, especially your kick/percs, find some better samples and things will start to fall into place

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Wow, lotsa bass here.

That high range synth at around 1:00 is too quiet. Get it a bit louder.

Ack, this kick roll is really annoying.

Your lead could be fatter, and louder. In fact, in general, production needs work.

Structure is fine, if a bit basic, and the melody is nice and such. Just get the production in the right place.

after many tries i finaly got it, kept timing out or something...
the track is ok, but to me it seems it doesnt have enough substance. Percusive elements seem ok to me, and that kick is really punchy. But melody wise it doesn't do it for me...