A sneaky peeky at the melody. Unfortunatly the tune was almost complete after a strange unknown reason the file dissapeared from my pc so i have had to restart everything from scratch including sounds percussion etc. what are your thoughts on the melody?.

http://s36.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=...VD1MMIANV4TOP6W

toward the end, i'd add an escalation, otherwise its too plain

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Yeh was thinking of trying to go down a few notes but the sub bass note change makes it less plain and bearable :P. But having lost all the sounds spent a while getting the right sounds back. It'll be the weekend till i mess about with it again :P.

Not too bad, but pretty standard. Kinda hard to tell without any percs really as to how it would really sound. A tad too repeditive too. Try adding some subtle chord changes every second bar or something.

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