hi..
my name is Prayag
i have used fruity loops to make this 1.
any suggestions are always welcome.
thnx.
updated!




updated

Last edited by funkysouls on Dec-23-2005 at 11:29

Where's the link?

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something went wrong first time wen i uploaded the trak..sorry for that
the link is right up.

You really should upload to a better site... like soundclick or something... The lag time is sad and so is the dl speed.

I like the intial synthy chimes... almost like it's the start of a trance set. Angellic!

The arrangement in this track is very unorthodox. Is more like home-listening trance than anything club-friendly.

Nice kick and hat-pattern... initially. The kick sounds fairly standard, but it'll work for now.

Very airy mix. Lacks a bass thus far, but the other elements are not too harsh. Like an angel seems fitting... this synth is quite the harp.

It's 2:35... I could use some bass right about now.

The doo-da-dee-daa melody is a tad cheesy. It lacks backbone in this mix. And I'm really feeling like there should be a bass now. I do love that one "radio-pad lead" thingie.

THe breakdown doesn't seem too well thought out. No pads, no volume drops.

I'm a little dissapointed in the lack of any bass...

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gr8..thnks for the review..
i ll try put some pads in it..any specific that suits thn let me kno

ive updated this one .
it now has some pads n bass.

Gave this a listen.

This has a very unfinished state in my opinion.
The intro feels more like something that might need to come in the first breakdown.

There is still no bassline as far as I can tell and to be honest I wouldn't settle for just one anyway. I would try and write maybe one basic driving bassline and then have 2 or 3 complementing just to give it drive.

The lead synth is ok in the beggining but by the time you get to the end it's full on annoying and just gets repetive.

Percussion.
I have listened to your other track too and percussion seems to be something that at this stage at least you don't spend a lot of time on. This is a touch frustrating as your tracks seem to have some really nice ideas but are held back by small things like this percussion issue.

When I write a track I usually put around 6 different high hat sounds in at the very least plus effects on them to make them more interesting. The use of a band pass filter can do some interesting things to a hi hat section and a delay effect can also make them a bit more lively.
Side Chain is another thing that would work nicely.

Keep going though as there is definately something there and I think if you put in the work you will become a very good producer.

All the best
Nem

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Originally posted by Nemesis44 Gave this a listen. This has a very unfinished state in my opinion. The intro feels more like something that might need to come in the first breakdown. There is still no bassline as far as I can tell and to be honest I wouldn't settle for just one anyway. I would try and write maybe one basic driving bassline and then have 2 or 3 complementing just to give it drive. The lead synth is ok in the beggining but by the time you get to the end it's full on annoying and just gets repetive. Percussion. I have listened to your other track too and percussion seems to be something that at this stage at least you don't spend a lot of time on. This is a touch frustrating as your tracks seem to have some really nice ideas but are held back by small things like this percussion issue. When I write a track I usually put around 6 different high hat sounds in at the very least plus effects on them to make them more interesting. The use of a band pass filter can do some interesting things to a hi hat section and a delay effect can also make them a bit more lively. Side Chain is another thing that would work nicely. Keep going though as there is definately something there and I think if you put in the work you will become a very good producer. All the best Nem

Thanks for ur advice Nem...i appreciate it.
"Like an angel" was my first track and i think people here can very much make out that.In "Infectious" , u can see some improvement in song building n progression but i m still uncomfortable with bass and breakdowns. hope to put in some better stuff next time surely.
thanks