Cristian Fuentes again. I seriously needed some inspiration to stick to a track. You ever started a track and said, ugh scrap this one! I'm going to start off fresh? Well, that's what happened to me. I decided to stick to a track I was about to give up on. Static Blue gave me some advice that was really deep
And now I can only present to this community what I have so far!
Constructive criticism could help alot! I'm really trying to mold my own sound into my track
Its a yousendit link, the track is a still in the works piece.
2 minutes long.

http://s50.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=...1K01QEIMX31NP3E


Thanks

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EoJ-cL2G_qY

Nice new tune dude. Glad that you decided to producing something again. The very beginning could start a tad bit slower b4 the beat comes into play. Other than that the song is good. The buildup of energy is very very good.

I think hats have to much high freqs,try filter,and cut resonance,main arp melody rocks!awesome..
I don't like buildup...,because buildup is to dry...You need flangus or maybe chorus on one instrument and then everything will be ok.
Also I think that your main melo(like arp) must be in a middle of pan and maybe different instrument must go from one side to other...
Nice job,and I see Idea is very good,but need much more work

9/10(because melody is very cool)

keep going!

Waves power

Thanks for the feedback, I'm still working on this track and I am up for some suggestions

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EoJ-cL2G_qY

quote:

[i][b]Static Blue gave me some advice that was really deep

this is a good one, it will need some further EQing and stuff but i like the ambiance / melodies.

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Linkmage, I think the highhats have to high of frequencies on them, but do you think it will help to add a soft clipper in order to soften the hats?
How about panning the percs from side to side, would that ruin the track.
I don't wanna butcher it too much. Keep it raw

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EoJ-cL2G_qY