I've been working on this new track of mine, called "Airways," and, although its still not even close to half way finished, I thought I'd listen to what you all had to say...its only a 2'23 second clip, i strongly appreciate constructive criticism, as i know it will help me a lot...so i would greatly appreciate your words, thanks a lot everyone..


heres the sendspace link to the track:

http://www.sendspace.com/file/ouepr9

sounds pretty good so far, cool bass sound, I can't turn subs up right now, but i'll try to get back with you about that.

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Well it sounds a bit flat, as in there isn't a drive. Try making it sound more connected in the bassline and add some more higher and thick percussion and maybe compressing all the percs just a tad.

Also, make sure your effect sounds have some kind of reverb or delay on them, they sound very dry.

Reupload when your done reworking.

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