I say, production quality sound pretty top notch except for minor things, but the theme isn't consistent enough and the intro drags a bit. Probably a matter of arrangement and writing a solid hook. Pretty groovy.
Feb-22-2010 09:22
Owsey
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Jan 2008
Location:
Some very nice and plesant sounding synthwork going on here. The melodies are great, too. Though, I do think it sounds quite empty as it is now. Personally, I would work on building up some pads and standout FX/synths/samples etc. But a good job nonetheless! I enjoyed it
Feb-22-2010 11:47
tehlord
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Jan 2009
Location: Windsor
Definately some very cool sounds and ideas in the track.
It does sound like a demo of a track rather than a track though, and a little flat.
This track sounds awesome slowed down. Very much reminds me of Gareth Emery/Ashley Wallbridge which is a great thing to do. Keep on doing what you do. Do you have any tracks signed yet?
Originally posted by Artois
This track sounds awesome slowed down. Very much reminds me of Gareth Emery/Ashley Wallbridge which is a great thing to do. Keep on doing what you do. Do you have any tracks signed yet?
lol, no man
donno who to ask and where to put it so I just throw it in here for you guys to enjoy
Feb-23-2010 04:14
Artois
tranceaddict
Registered: Nov 2009
Location: Berkeley
I gotcha send out some of your originals some time to labels im sure youd be suprised by the response
Originally posted by meriter
Your primary focus should be making good music. That's all. No one gives a shit how you do it. And the people that do are fags.
Feb-23-2010 06:59
Nightshift
...Ninja Business...
Registered: Oct 2005
Location: Sacramento, California
new update to the 128 version is awesome, keep pushin that envelope man!
Originally posted by meriter
Your primary focus should be making good music. That's all. No one gives a shit how you do it. And the people that do are fags.
Feb-23-2010 07:04
novastorm
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Jan 2002
Location: Perth, Western Australia
agree with Artois, very Wallbridge/Emery flavour here! Although not quite as strong in the low-mids and lows as their stuff. Your distorty main lead for example would be even better with a little more mid to it, its a tad scratchy. Very infectious melodies though, they're still rolling about my skull! In some parts it gets slightly stale - I think this sort of trance demands some imaginative transitions (something I definitely struggle with) to break up the repetition.
Didn't think I'd say this but I have to agree that the 128bpm-er edges out the faster version! The groove comes through a lot better. Bring on more!
edit: just realised I wasn't following you yet on SC, outrageous! all fixed now
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Feb-23-2010 10:45
BshidoHEAT
don't be that guy!!!
Registered: Nov 2003
Location: Ninjas never tell....
This is good stuff, although I've heard better from ya (Rainy Sunrise, is right now one of my favorite songs to listen to at the moment). I've only listened to this on my laptop speakers though.
I think this really just needs a catchy hook. But good stuff though.
