Nobody?

I really would appreciate some feedback/criticism so that I can work on my producing skills during my next track.

Thank a lot!

Cheers,

LOON

I hope you encoded it in a lower bitrate because the low end felt a little weak in my headphones at work. Could be the work computer though.

The bright pad felt a bit dated in my opinion. It works, but it just felt overly nostalgic to me.

Loads of energy in the low end complimented by a nice lead in the track. I'm not sure how I feel about the track but it does warrant another pass for sure.

2nd pass - Once the main lead kicks in the track reminds me of flying... kind of like Adam Szabo's stuff.

Eh... send me a 128 faded version of it and I'll submit it for possibility of Swarm signing if you'd like. There are a good number of elements in it.

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Thanks for the feedback darthseph!

I see what you mean regarding the bright pad. For my next track I'll try to do a better job there..

I've tried to make the low end a bit stronger, but mastering is not my strongest point.hehe..

Updated version is now posted on Soundcloud(and the player above).

Cheers,

LOON