i think this might be the best work i've heard from you. nice melody, no complaints there.

I really like where this is going so far. When the first small drop happens at 2.26 it really works well, although I can see a lead line taking it to another level. I can also see a sweet chord change soon after the track finishes now so that the bassline would go from playing Ab,Bb then C to then playing F, G then Ab.

I think the mix is still being hemmed in by the BX5s but there's little you can really do about that right now!!

You've probably still got a ton to add but some extras sweps and swooshes in the intro would probably lift the feel a bit too.

Excellent work so far though, I'm really looking forward to hearing the final version!

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@msz Thanks man!

@tehlord Yeah, these monitors aren't very effective. Gonna have to think about getting others, but I'm glad that you like it, and I'll look into those chord progs!

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Hey man, well this is gonna be huge I can tell already! I'm not sensing much in the sub bass range but apart from that its a really nice full sound, great synths - very Sophie Sugar sound going on here. This is a buildup yeah? The melody is strong enough to continue on into the main section, you'd just need to add some extra chord changes or maybe a high pad counter-melody to differentiate it. Great start!

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This is some serious effort going on in this track already with great sound and the way you structure this track - well done buddy.

You have so much flexibility build into this first part that you shouldn't have any problem with development of the rest of this track.

I would use tehlord ideas to spice up your track.

Well done and keep them coming M.

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