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You got some nice fxs going on here. It does so much good to the track, cause the synths you used are quite basic. E.g. in the break, the first lead synth could use a chorus or so if you dont want to detune the whole thing. The backing lead synth which takes over is pretty good though, I like the waving in it. I like the chord progression as well. It seems you used the buzz effect adaptor (or some resembling vst fx) to make the waving, and I think there's a bit too much resonance there, hurt my ears a bit.
I think you could add some strings as mentioned and put some extra percussive elements in there, the hats are quite thin. You could add some volume to them as well.
Really really nice work, I hope you can improve it even more!!
-Jay
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