http://www.mixposure.com/song.php?songid=5403

Feedback would be nice

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yea man I like it. Its mean!.. The only thing I don't like is the stab that comes in every so often in the beginning. But its different. Nice.

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my life is a drama with a begining, a middle and no end.

that'd be a fucking quality breaks tune
doesn't have the impact it could have like that

Thanks guys

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this is ok.. but the first synth is WAY too trebley, and the whole thing clips alot... try reducing the volume and take down some of the treble on that synth, its ear bleeding at the moment! Also the bass is very muddy, try and make that a bit clearer. apart from that cool ideas.. a little repetative maybe, vocals are fun!

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I like it even if its a tad repetitive. Really a nice track concept here

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Cheers Marco

Mike - the bass is supposed to be muddy - almost like a drone almost. BUt thanks for your advise about the synths

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first synth is tite, would prolly sound ever cooler in a big club

but when everything comes in, the synth sounds a little out of place... i'm also not a fan of the stab... snare build is too loud. the treble on that synth is bothering me now

all in all, relaxing and nicely produced, mastering needs work tho

keep it up

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Oops i produce dubstep now.

NumberNin6 / Ethereal / Orana Project / Greenlight

getting now will hear nd feedback when i return from class

ricky PM reply at least

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Originally posted by Mike_Foyle this is ok.. but the first synth is WAY too trebley, and the whole thing clips alot... try reducing the volume and take down some of the treble on that synth, its ear bleeding at the moment! Also the bass is very muddy, try and make that a bit clearer. apart from that cool ideas.. a little repetative maybe, vocals are fun!

I listend to it , and i must agree with mike on every point.

kick sounds also a bit drowned a bit, maybe due that acid, it's very loud.

nice prec though

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Originally posted by Octanesyco Greetings. My name is Casey. You can call me Moose. -Moose

*Listening* The sounds are very extraordinary. Like them.
It's funky, progressive and trancy at the same time
This could be something really good!
Maybe the mainsound takes over the track some. Maybe u could *pan* it, when it comes to the volume.

Good luck with it.




/Moolow
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