Hi Mate,

new track again here,so let´s hear... i think this is your best track so far.very very great melody.reminds me to an older in trance we trust record.but please let the breakbeat part away.it doesn´t fit so good in my opinion.bugs the building.this track has much potential,with some improvements here and there i think it has perhaps the chance to get signed anywhere because the main lead and drive in it is fantastic.good work and luck man.

Riialto

massive kick.
like the percs in the intro.
I like the sound of the bass but it's too stereo imo.
think the hat needs to be more panned to the left. too righty
here's the break...really nice, I like that part with the breaks. more powerful strings (I'd go for violin) would fit this part perfectly.
after the break you must put an fx or something to make the part after it more...powerful. imo it's kinda weak.
another thing, the hat is too loud in the main part and the lead is too quite (add another layer to it or boost its volume).
that's all. keep it up

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Thanks guys for the first two replies. I agree the hihat is a bit too loud, already fine tuned it for the next version. Will put it up for listening tomorrow I think.

Glad you both like the tracks. Anyone has an idea what label might be interested in this sort of track?

Cheers,

Nomen nescio

nice track here it defo has that old trance track feel, break beat maybe could go but i like it all the same. Once you treaked it how you need to try some labels. good stuff mate

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Originally posted by music2dance2 nice track here it defo has that old trance track feel, break beat maybe could go but i like it all the same. Once you treaked it how you need to try some labels. good stuff mate

Thanks mate, I wanted to create that old school trance type of feel so I am glad I succeeded Getting some good reactions so far

Cheers!

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Originally posted by music2dance2 nice track here it defo has that old trance track feel, break beat maybe could go but i like it all the same. Once you treaked it how you need to try some labels. good stuff mate

...just heard a non breakbeat version of it and it sounds much better than the old version.very pro stuff in my opinion.like it much.

Riialto

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Originally posted by 1mason11 ...just heard a non breakbeat version of it and it sounds much better than the old version.very pro stuff in my opinion.like it much. Riialto

First of all, thanks again for the compliment. Glad to hear you like the track so much.

Opinions seem to differ on the breakbeat part Riialto. I also like the non breakbeat version as well. My best friend actually created this breakbeat, since I am no beat wizzard. That is his department I am very curious how other people think about the breakbeat section during the break. Does it add anything to the track or not?

People keep them comments coming

Cheers,

Nomen Nescio

damn that is pretty good man wow.

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Originally posted by Flashback damn that is pretty good man wow.

Haha that is a nice short comment..... thanks mate!

I have a bad connection speed so I had to listen to it in lo-fi...
Track is really good, because I feel the main point. It sounds like *classic* trance and I like it. I can't say anything about mastering... 22 kbit stream sucks..
But
I think it's worth to try to do anew structure of "growing" of this track. Bass starts too early and all synths starts without "presentation" - abruptly and straight away. I think it's better to make short a part before main break.

So I think you should "redesign" this track a little, and it become more accomplished.

Good luck

Nice track man, excellent trancey vibe and there's heaps of energy in the mix. I reckon it could do with some more fx, swooshy stuff ... especially when the track drops out to a breakdown. That'll cover up some of the transitions.
Overall a top song!

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