Please give me some feedback on my new tune,is kick weak,what about pads and structure?

Krivi - Life is a sea ( RIGHT CLICK + SAVE AS... )

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Last edited by krivi on Apr-08-2005 at 23:46

something wrong with the mp3

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i dunno what's the problem mate?
for me it work without problem.

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the file is only 8 kb

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you need to copy the link to a new window and press enter.
the 8kb file you downloaded is actually a gif picture.

bout the track itself:
mmm intro...kinda standart percs, but thery're good.
like those pads, they fit the track's name imo maybe add a sample of a real sea or smth in the background..
nice synths.
the kick really is a bit weak in the main parts of the track
nice break. the lead is quite thin.
like this melody.

overall very good job.

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Hey Krivi...
Your link doesnt work...its just a gif!

As RONK says, you have to type the dang thing all out! BLAH!

Im not lazy so I did! LOL

Nice intro...love those synths that come in after the intro percs!! AMAZING! Such a fresh sounding lead! Subtle yet powerful! Sounds like a combination of one of those Japanese flutes and a female voice...nice.
The song seemed a tad long. I was looking for a really intense re-entry of the song after the break but it didnt come in as strongly as I had hoped.
Still, the melody really brings it! Solid production too! Great levels, good crisp percs, no timing issues.
BANG ON!

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Hey Krivi,

Just listened to your track. It is clear you have some producing talent. The build up is really good, good atmosphere, the percussion is good. I love the effects that you use and the pads are really nice.


But frankly the track as a whole doesn't do it for me. The break itself and what happens after it makes the track monotonous. There is hardly a melody change. You introduce a nice lead synth sound but the track goes on just like it did during the build up. That is a bit of a let down.

Furthermore, the EQ'ing is way to high. The track sounds a bit light and sharp. If you would add a bit more bass in the track and lower the highs a bit it would sounds better.

Overal the track is very decent apart from the monotonous ongoing melody.

Cheers!

Nomen Nescio

thanx guys,very useful tips

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