Hi there,

Here's the final result, i have added some more effects and changed some other little things. Thx for the tips and suggestions.

Here's the final version (96k):

http://www.wire.fm/board/two-song.php?id=19683

-Ron

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Last edited by Romi on Dec-24-2005 at 07:32

Beautiful intro...

I can't really complain about the intro other than I think it is a tad long. It has an excellent vibe that continues into the trance beat. Maybe you'd want to hold off on those melodies and build up to them more from a deeper trance beat. Just a thought, but I'm not at your skill level IMO.

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Thx for the comment Four_On_Four-er. Forgot to say the clip starts with the break.

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Updated version now available here:

http://www.wire.fm/board/two-song.php?id=19251

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Hello Romi,

This is my kind of Trance and it still doesn't loose it's grip, the "sunset"-Trance, I mean by that
Nice atmos U created, but I really need a break/build-up in this one cause you surprised me with the ending. Means the song structure could be a lot better. (I guess you probably are working on that at the moment)
Rhythm is nicely done, only the snare afterbeat seems to be a bit in the thin side. (by that, I mean it sounds like a hiss-sound)

Hope you'll be working on this one, and check my new one if you like.

-weBs

Hey Romi,

Nice atmosphere to start out the song. The bassline sounds to come in abruptly...maybe add some effects or a swoosh. The loop gets old after some time, but I like the surreal feel to the song.

Nice work

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Thx for the suggestions guys. And websley, as i said in my begintopic, it's just a portion of the break and a part of the climax for now, so yes, the structure is gonna be a lot more different, still working on the build-up and other parts. I have checked out your track websley, nice one.

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Last edited by Romi on Dec-05-2005 at 08:02

great atmosphere and melody, but i feel the bass is a bit to loud and that estuera/jonas steur typa synth is a bit over used, but very cool work so far, the kick/bass/percussion combo works awesome.

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hi ron

by the way cheers for the review of my track..

onto panoramic..

i love the 'vangelis' sound you use. its really 80's and lush sounding. bass is nice. it sounds dirty! and complements your clean style.

i have very high hopes for this. i think this is one of my favourites of yours.

please please please! change some of the percs you use on this. for some unusual sounds. i think the percs are a bit standard and the melodies are far from standard.. i mean you could add like a ring modulator effect to the clap for example and end up with a wicked sound that would add to the unusal spacy melodies your using..?

when its done please can i have a 320k because i really like this..

rich

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Hey Romi

Cool track you got here indeed, though I feel the break at the start is a little thin, those strings are all very 'high'sounding, I would throw in a big low string to complement them. The bass and kick are very well done though, very driving. Keep it up!

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nice one Romi.

can't comment too much on the production level as i'm on computer speakers now, but i like the feel of this track. i think the break (which i presume is the beginning intro of your sample) could do with some more ambient pads or effects in the background tho, sounds a bit thin at the moment.

but melody-wise, it's real nice to listen to. keep it up man.

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Very nice,
Just been working on one of my own dark and moody tracks and ears were getting tired. This was a nice break and very uplifting. thanks for sharing it.

Keep up the good work

Cheers
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