I worked on this choon last night, and I really liked the direction it was heading. I wanted to do some atmospherically rich tracks. Originally it was meant to be an ambient/new age type thing (I'll leave that to the pros *cough Kopi Cough*)and I was way too tempted to add a kick and a nice bassline. Alas I came up with this mess!
Should I add some more elements? I wish I could get it to be good enough to get it signed to a prog label.

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Comments are appreciated

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Hey,
this is'nt progressive track...this is uplifting trance...
I like Bass rhytmic line,and hats variations is cool...
I think for that you need long build up,if you want progressive-trance,and not much places without rhytm.
overall:nice looking track..I love this bassline and deep kick...

Thanks for the review sir Linkmage! I dunno, seemed to me kinda proggy. But it is sure nice to know that it has some uplifting qualities that i love

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LOL at pros, not pro here at all buddie .
Try to produce for fun dude, when you produce someting wanting to be released u can feel frustrated, it has hapenned to all .
Now the track, nice chilled stuff, it does not sound uplifting to me, I would say is progressive as you said, but I dont know much aboiut EDM so dont take me too serious :P.
Going pretty nice, I would use other pads, some huge pads, this ones are nice but sound a bit weak, try to use something that fulls alot of the spectrum, fat.
Going really cool man keep it up .
Kopi =o.

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nice crisp sounds overall!
I like the little nonphat lead at the start, great pads!
bassline is a bit too standard imo.. but it flows really well though.
nice atmosphere
really nice track looking forward to the update!

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Thanks for the reviews every one. I do in fact wantto add fatter pads but am scared this will only end up taking away the "light" "weightless" feeling this track has.

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WOW!

I love it, yeah the bassline is a bit of the "usual" but it fits with the track. its a beautiful piece. The only thing that needs sorting out is the white noise sweeps they seem a bit out of time after the little break.

Id love to hear the full version of this!




http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...threadid=314255

Thanks for the reply. Ill post this as soon as its done. Although I want to submit to see if it can be signed, I want to share it for a bit.

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