Hey,
Listening .... The first sound, does sound like an arpegiator or a sequence from a vsti, kinda messed though, I like the pad in the background, it's pretty athmospheric but I think it sounds a bit prominent than the rest of the sounds, sounds like zeta, your drums are a bit weak, I would make the kick stronger imo and compress them plus lacks of an Open Hi-Hat imo .
In overall, you got nice ideas, is a happy track , you just need to work more the Drums and to try to balance better the sounds and make better the buildup but is a cool track .
PS.If you wanna take a look to my track, is below, any kind of feedback is welcome .
Kopi =O.

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this is really good mate

i really like those little melodies in the track,

i wish you the best of luck with the track!

Peter

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this a pogr3ssive science outfit / blipping dream sound. Like it well will keep this sample.

Wishing you best luck.

keep up the work man =) you got something on track.

I reckon this track is rather nice! Perhaps a bit too 'bleepy' for my likings though.

Keep it up!

// Wim

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first of all, great work here, i think a few pointers are definatly pronouncing your percussion better, it sounds drowned out, and bringin your bleepy synth down a bit cause its a bit overpowering, i like the pads tho, nice admosphere.


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Blips are to loud mate.

Beat is way to weak.

nice atmosphere.

Didn't like the lead synth.

Fix those small melodies, they are way to loud, same with the background pad i think.

Thats all

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Originally posted by Octanesyco Greetings. My name is Casey. You can call me Moose. -Moose

Thanx All For Listening and i hope my next productions are going to be better

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hey man, sounds alot better than the last version, glad to see that you kept workin at this one , but yea, I'd say you still need a little work on your purcussion, btw, what you have to day bout a remix?

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Cool intro... track sounds like a big improvement since the last stuff I heard from you... pads sound dissonant... I guess I would have to hear a solo of the pads to see if there are any bad notes in there or if it's just some weird EQing or if it was done on purpose.... it's good sometimes, but I wouldn't have it for the majority of the track (being dissonant). Kick is cool but I'd prefer it with more top end punch but that's just my opinion... the bassline is very standard, but it seems to work well in this track... a LOT of tracks posted here use that bassline but it TOTALLY doesn't go, but in your track at least it goes!

I love the melody but the dissonance in the pads doesn't really grab me... maybe focus on better chord structures for the pads.. like simple triads with open voicings would sound better than the dodgy harmonies here.

Once polished, record some heavenly female vox on here and you have yourself a radio dance hit... that's what it sounds from what I hear... plus the fact of it being a 3 minute song adds to the radio feel. Perhaps the use of some phatter synth sounds could be used to liven up the track and make people get out of their seats... because the way it's executed now sounds more like a dreamy stare-at-the-wall track.

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hey Karim, sounds really nice.. most things are said i think

cheers,
Renco

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Dj Radman
Thanx and i'll make u da midi

gerrycueto
Thanx alot for listening and for your review and i'll take in consideration all of your comments to make a nice track


djrenco
Thanx dude and wait 4 more

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