Not bad... but the sound seems a bit too heavy on either distortion during the majority of the sample. In the build down its alright, but the rest feels a bit too grainy or convoluted. Wish I could explain it more... maybe muddy is the right word.

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Sounds really nice. Solid build.

I think there needs to be some sort of shock effect at 45 seconds, maybe a kick with reverb or cymbal or some white noise to emphasize that bass coming in.

but i agree with darth, this sounds a little grainy and distorted.

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thanks for the comments,

muddyness can be attributed to my bass guitar

it has passive pickups and my active DI box doesn't seem to make it any clearer.

i'll give a electric guitar a try.

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pretty nice man, however, you need to work on your mix a lot its not done well. your kick for example, sounds terrible in the mix.