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Posted by Mr.Mystery on Dec-28-2003 18:40:

Smile OrgaNik - Avatara

Here's something I've been working on during the christmas holidays.

It's a mellow, slower (134bpm) track again with pianos and floaty melodies.

OrgaNik - Avatara (Work In Progress Sample)
It's a VBR ogg sample about 1MB in size. Notice the difference in sound quality compared to a mp3 file the same size

Some of the levels still need some tweaking so no need to nag about them

All comments welcome (as usual )
Nik


Posted by dbl on Dec-28-2003 18:54:

i love pianos

sounds really nice.... except for the levels.. hehe

maybe could need some more intressting percussions thou..

but fix the levels and post again.. hehe


Posted by Bren-F on Dec-28-2003 19:06:

Sounding good mate, not much to say as it is only a short sample but from what I hear it sounds great.
Maybe more focus on the part at the begining, some more breakbeat would be great (U know U want to )
Look forward to hearing the full mix.


Posted by TOR on Dec-28-2003 19:19:

quote:
Originally posted by dbl
i love pianos


i don't, at least not in a trance track.

so i don't quite like this one, since it's not my style..
strings sound pretty good, though.


Posted by Mr.Mystery on Dec-28-2003 19:29:

quote:
Originally posted by tor8024
i don't, at least not in a trance track.

so i don't quite like this one, since it's not my style..
strings sound pretty good, though.

Yes, I've gathered that.
To be honest I don't really understand why you even listen if you know you're not going to like it...

Bren... I know I want to too


Posted by TOR on Dec-28-2003 19:44:

quote:
Originally posted by Mr.Mystery
To be honest I don't really understand why you even listen if you know you're not going to like it...


i do not know whether i'm going to like it or not, i can't predict the future, can I?
it can always turn out to be pretty good..
i love scarab - vagabond for example. symphony in blue as well.

it is true, most of the time it feels a bit awkward hearing a piano in a trance track. but there are always exeptions.


Posted by Omegasox on Dec-28-2003 19:49:

Something doesn't sound right in the intro. I can't quite put my finger on it, though. Once the 4x4 comes in it sounds great. Eager to hear the full version of this, loved your last track.


Posted by Mr.Mystery on Dec-28-2003 19:55:

quote:
Originally posted by Omegasox
Something doesn't sound right in the intro. I can't quite put my finger on it, though. Once the 4x4 comes in it sounds great. Eager to hear the full version of this, loved your last track.


Cheers. If you find out what's bugging you let me know when there's still a chance to change it


Posted by Ste on Dec-28-2003 20:07:

cool tune, cant wait for the b side entitled "signatura"













Posted by Mr.Mystery on Dec-28-2003 20:10:

quote:
Originally posted by Ste
cool tune, cant wait for the b side entitled "signatura"



*hohum*
http://www.avatara.org/


Posted by Indicative on Dec-28-2003 20:29:

This is really good Mr.Mystery! Wish I could make music so good


Posted by Mr.Mystery on Dec-28-2003 20:33:

quote:
Originally posted by Indicative
This is really good Mr.Mystery! Wish I could make music so good

Well I don't know how to respond to that without sounding cocky but... thanks!


Posted by EternalMusic on Dec-28-2003 20:36:

I like some parts of the melody, its very nice and mellow , however there are some parts where the harmony isnt correct umm cant be to specific about it though, i could help you more if you'd send me a midi . Anyway with some note change it'll be alot better in my opinion.
Cheers! Great work overall !


EM.


Posted by Mr.Mystery on Dec-28-2003 20:38:

quote:
Originally posted by EternalMusic
I like some parts of the melody, its very nice and mellow , however there are some parts where the harmony isnt correct umm cant be to specific about it though, i could help you more if you'd send me a midi . Anyway with some note change it'll be alot better in my opinion.
Cheers! Great work overall !


EM.

I think I know what you mean, there's a section on the last part of the melody that I wasn't entirely sure about.


Posted by Puuhis on Dec-28-2003 21:06:

The begin reminds me of some Faithless song (which name I cannot recall at the moment), but great tune nevertheless.


Posted by Mr.Mystery on Dec-28-2003 22:47:

quote:
Originally posted by Puuhis
The begin reminds me of some Faithless song (which name I cannot recall at the moment)

Is that good or bad?


Posted by Syeker on Dec-29-2003 03:54:

Sounds good to me. Keep up the good work


Posted by Psygnosis on Dec-29-2003 09:09:

Well what can i say, this is brilliant...the idea is fantastic...

Also try to add more elements...seems a bit repetitive, though it still sounds good

can't wait for the full version.

Cheers


Posted by Mr.Mystery on Dec-29-2003 12:26:

quote:
Originally posted by Psygnosis
Well what can i say, this is brilliant...the idea is fantastic...

Also try to add more elements...seems a bit repetitive, though it still sounds good

can't wait for the full version.

Cheers


Thanks. The idea here was to create a hypnotic mood to the track with multiple short looping melodies that slowly transform and morph.

I'm gonna add some fx snippets and perk up the percs to keep it interesting tho.


Posted by Endre on Dec-29-2003 12:44:


its nice, reminds me of, theme music from the game "Final Fantasy 8" or something. i think you should make i more deep progressive, it would fit very well.

cheers


Posted by Mr.Mystery on Dec-29-2003 12:57:

quote:
Originally posted by Endre

its nice, reminds me of, theme music from the game "Final Fantasy 8" or something. i think you should make i more deep progressive, it would fit very well.

cheers

Yeah, I think my path will eventually lead to deeper prog. Maybe not with this particular track but possibly the next one. I've grown quite tired of ordinary trance and I feel like doing something else altogether...


Posted by Shepless on Dec-29-2003 14:18:

Read This!

Hey,mive downloaded the file, but i got nothing to play a ".ogg" file :S?? what the hell do i use?

Shep


Posted by Mr.Mystery on Dec-29-2003 14:35:

quote:
Originally posted by Shepless
Hey,mive downloaded the file, but i got nothing to play a ".ogg" file :S?? what the hell do i use?

Shep

Winamps from 2.81 onwards play them just fine.

In other cases, http://www.vorbis.com/


Posted by Puuhis on Dec-29-2003 18:03:

quote:
Originally posted by Mr.Mystery
Is that good or bad?


Good of course.


Posted by Haunted on Dec-29-2003 21:15:

great peice of work


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