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Posted by Martin McG on Jan-05-2004 22:00:

Thumbs up Convex - Dark Loops (Original Dub Mix)

alrite people

well its been a while since ive posted some stuff on here so i thought id add up my latest track im working on its in 192!

darkish and bangin!

this is still in progress so i know the mastering etc is "a bit" off lol

=========UPDATED MP3============

but any feedback would be great

cheers
Martin

+*+*+ Dark Loops +*+*+


Posted by Luke Terry on Jan-05-2004 22:08:

Cool

interesting, a track by dave, remixed by martin, will download when i can be arsed


Posted by Fundamental on Jan-06-2004 15:21:

Typical bangin stuff from yourself. Love that sound you got when it breaks down at 2:58. I think it could benifit from a dark but simplistic melody - and don't give me the "I can't do melodies excuse". Liking what you have done though...


Posted by Pjotr G on Jan-06-2004 22:06:

think this would do well in a club. Here at home it's just a tad dull, especially for the first minute. Something like a little quirky non-melodic (so rhythmic ) synthsound, that can get tweaked throughout the track would make it more interesting I'd think.

but not bad


Posted by Technaut on Jan-07-2004 11:59:

not bad martin, no bad at all.


have you been working on it since you registered?


Posted by nils on Jan-07-2004 12:21:

sounding a bit innovative
alot of drums and perc, sounds kewl
though, something is missing.. perhaps the kick is to "hard-trancey" or pads, or some kind of loop with notes etc?
dunno

nice producing


Posted by Martin McG on Jan-07-2004 16:27:

cheers for the comments guys!

yeah the tracks no where near finished yet, still working on a rhythm and synth to put to it yet (always seems to be the last thing!)

this is just a basic idea of where the track is going really

ill take into account some of your constructive criticism, hey tech hows the smack habit going? junkie fuck

any more comments


Posted by Technaut on Jan-07-2004 21:50:

i'll voice another comment......


Martin, do you think being born a smack baby has hindered you music making skills in anyw way ?

also, were u at IO on nye u fucking ****?

thanks

Stu


Posted by Martin McG on Jan-08-2004 22:09:

i was at IO NYE but was rather intoxicated!


Posted by rqpeyruxvg on Jan-09-2004 10:21:

very percy, dark tribal stuff.

good mastering etc.

i like it, not really much to say yet will have a good listen when i get some time mate.

Keep it up!

Tezz


Posted by Martin McG on Jan-10-2004 16:02:

cool tezz mate

cheers for having a listen to it, i look forward to a more detailed reply

anyone else?!


Posted by noikeee on Jan-12-2004 16:32:

nice, percs sound very clear, but as everyone said a little bit of a melodic element (or a dull synth) could improve it. or if you want to keep it as an exclusively percussive track, try a bit more variation, or even some wild filtering to make it stand out


Posted by allstar on Jan-12-2004 16:35:

quote:
Originally posted by paranoik0
nice, percs sound very clear, but as everyone said a little bit of a melodic element (or a dull synth) could improve it. or if you want to keep it as an exclusively percussive track, try a bit more variation, or even some wild filtering to make it stand out


That pretty much sums it up Good job.


Posted by Martin McG on Jan-12-2004 17:04:

cheers for the comments people much appreciated

im currently in the process of updating the song at the moment

added another synthy picotto esque sub bass to give it more BOOM

working on a sub melody to counter the sub bass

and thinking about adding a little vocal snippet if i can find the right one lol

and as for the filtering im getting some tips on that as we speak

cheers lads!

any more?


Posted by arctic on Jan-12-2004 21:11:

I keep getting a bloody 'too many users connected' message whenever I try to download it.

Ah well, i'll keep trying.


Posted by Martin McG on Jan-12-2004 21:12:

quote:
Originally posted by arctic
I keep getting a bloody 'too many users connected' message whenever I try to download it.

Ah well, i'll keep trying.


lol ill hit you on msn if you prefer


Posted by Sean Walsh on Jan-12-2004 22:14:

Unable to download it; will review when I'm able.


Posted by Martin McG on Jan-13-2004 22:04:

ok havinf some trouble ATM with the hosting

too many connections or something :S


just a quick update, song is almost finished added a rhythm synth to give it more groove so ive just to master that now

and still considering the little vocal snippets but havent got any i like ATM so i may just stick with no vocals

ill post up the new version for some reviews when the host has cooled down a bit lol

martin


Posted by Fundamental on Jan-14-2004 08:00:

Ah, sounds better Martin! Lovin the melody you have there now - suits the style of the track perfectly, and it seems to keep the track flowing more.

Er... Good improvement!


Posted by Nemesis44 on Jan-14-2004 10:08:

Like the thought of anything dark and bangin' wasn't able to hear it though... will try again later.

Cheers
Nem


Posted by ABSYNTH on Jan-16-2004 19:06:

First off, thanks for the help mate, you 2 Luke

The track is sounding well, the new riff is holding its own but i think like and some have pointed out that it needs some kind of melody to finish it off! Mastering is really clean, sweet sound.

Keep workin on that hook and you could have a top track here and if i was you i would be sending it 2 ID+T

Good job mate!

Duncan


Posted by Martin McG on Jan-18-2004 16:13:

cheers for the review dunc

ok people now just getting the hosting fixed so i can upload the updated version and get som more feedback

upload very soon


Posted by Bryan Kearney on Jan-18-2004 19:11:

Excellent track really like this.

Fair play


Posted by Martin McG on Jan-18-2004 19:35:

cheers bryan

like i say the update will be up ASAP so hopefully itll add something more to the track


Posted by Martin McG on Jan-23-2004 22:38:

alrite people

newest update of this

well so far ive added a bit of a dark hook to the track, hope you like it

still working on some FX for the track, cant get what i want and having limited time to do it doesnt help

let me know any more views

cheers people

Updated Version Dark Loops


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