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Posted by _Marco_ on Jan-09-2002 23:46:

New Track Dj L&l Opinion & Remix Ddl

Hey there
Dj L&L - Made my Day (Original Mix)
Thats a new track from me sure its not as good as some of your tracks but the melody is damn f*cking great (to me)
Free for remix
Give your opinion (mantis,lightwork,pjotrG,dave b etc... )
Thx for your time
Enjoy!
Right Click Save as http://perso.wanadoo.fr/famille600w/mademyday.mp3

Posted by _Marco_ on Jan-09-2002 23:50:

btw post reply for details cuz i dont know how to use the pm

Posted by Icone on Jan-10-2002 01:19:

Re: New Track Dj L&l Opinion & Remix Ddl

hey dl'ing it now my friend

you have any files (midi or something) to remix it?

Take care! Wim @LW

Posted by _Marco_ on Jan-10-2002 01:32:

ya man fuity loops! lol ill upload it tomorrow

Posted by Pjotr G on Jan-10-2002 08:57:

- Downloading
- Listening

To go with the strings and melody, you should pitch your bassline a couple of tones down, I believe 5 semitones?

Your mix sounds a bit empty....maybe some more drums (there's more out there than a shaker and 2 hihats and clap) and a can of delay and reverb (specially reverb) on....pretty much everything except drums (only a little bit on drums).

Also you keep your bassline at one tone, it may sound more matural if you let it go with the strings.

I dunno...it just sounds a bit dry and empty.

Posted by Icone on Jan-10-2002 09:56:

hey there buddy

i checked the track and i believe most what pjotr said was true... you could add some more things like a driving bass or one that sounds more distinctive and some more drums.

the melody is nice though, it catches your ear immediately
there's just a little work to do on the percussion and bass, i think the rest is ok.

Post the flp file, so that i can start remixing
Take care, Wim @ LW

Posted by _Marco_ on Jan-10-2002 14:59:

hey

thank you pjotr and lw for your time sure its a bit empty but i dont like building the drums and the bass so....
ill try to make it better with your advice thx it is my first song.
Ill post the flp file when my f*cking sever will work.
Cya

Posted by _Marco_ on Jan-10-2002 17:56:

http://perso.wanadoo.fr/famille600w/mademelodie.zip
here is the file for remix
must be unzipped first

Posted by mantisnl on Jan-10-2002 20:47:

hey.. sorry I`m late hehe...

My opinion:

-very very nice! u r good.. but the finish isn`t everything is good.. but most things r 2 loud.. or to soft.. and the build up isn`t that perfect.. sometimes you`ve used the wrong samples (I think hehe..)
but if that was good.. it would be perfect!

I`ll make a remix

hope I`ll be finished soon

greetz,

DJ Mantis

Posted by _Marco_ on Jan-10-2002 21:29:

Yo mantis thx for your opinion i was a bit sad with the other replies but yours making me happy enough to follow and to rearrange it so that it is perfect.
Thx man
Cant wait till u remix it

Posted by Icone on Jan-10-2002 22:54:

hey marco v

don't let any people telling you what's right or wrong with your track discourage you... I've been there too, you know.

The first words about a track i made on this forum was "first i have to say what a shit mix..." - a disgruntled tranceaddict maybe?? i'm not gonna call his name though
but there you have it... it was a track alot of people have loved and listened too over quite some time and then i posted it here to see what real tranceaddicts thought of it - quite depressing

but yet, you'l learn from those words (well not exactly those, but...) and get better and better... you'll see

keep it up! you definately got a nice taste of melody there
Cheers, Wim @ LW

Posted by _Marco_ on Jan-10-2002 23:35:

thank you man

u know im doing trax since a long time like 3years but it was always shit i really was happy to say this track is mine
Sure what ur telling is to make me come better and im pleased of that
im gonna redo this track with everybodies opinion and with the remix u gonna make
thx

Posted by Icone on Jan-10-2002 23:49:

yeah that's fine

don't forget to post the flp file!
Take care, Wim @ LW

Posted by _Marco_ on Jan-11-2002 00:19:

i didnt forget just look 3-4 post before yours there must be a zip file with the melody ask if u want the full track on flp
Regards

Posted by Icone on Jan-11-2002 09:43:

quote:
Originally posted by marco.V
i didnt forget just look 3-4 post before yours there must be a zip file with the melody ask if u want the full track on flp
Regards

ow i must have missed that one, sorry for that
got it now, thx
take care, Wim @ LW

Posted by mantisnl on Jan-11-2002 21:37:

hey m8.. made a remix.. I`ll see if I can upload it tonight..

I`ve added a nice vocal in it hehe.. as usual

greetz,

DJ Mantis

Posted by mantisnl on Jan-11-2002 22:02:

Allright! here it is! the remix from DJ Mantis!

damn.. thats TO `MUCH` isn`t it

anywayz.. here it is (right click, save as):

DJ D&L - Made My Day (DJ Mantis Remix)

Enjoy, all of u.. and post some reactions plzz

Greetz,

DJ Mantis

Posted by _Marco_ on Jan-12-2002 16:42:

What a day!

First i get some tickets for the trance energy then i heard a remix from L&L (not D&L mantis )
This remix is great m8 the voice is cool (where do you take the voices from?)
im very happy (first time someone remix one of my song)
seems like ill do a remix of this remix but im waiting the lightworks one to make a kicking tune)
Thx for your time man
im happy

Posted by _Marco_ on Jan-12-2002 16:44:

ho i forgot mantis can u upload the flp file from this remix) or send it to me ([email protected])

Posted by mantisnl on Jan-12-2002 17:00:

Hi thnx u like my remix.. the vocals.. euh.. I`ll upload them..

but for the .flp file.. my server doesn`t take flp files.. don`t understand that...

greetz,

DJ Mantis

Posted by D_G on Jan-12-2002 18:06:

Hey man,

Just came here from the Signs of Symmetry Thread... U asked about me remixing a tune of u'res or sumthing... im guessing this is the thread u were talking about...!

Okay, so i'll need a zipped .flp file

[Dan]

Posted by Haak on Jan-12-2002 18:29:

pretty nice track, I love the melody, but I agree that it needs more work in the rhytm department. The bass reminds me alot of the one in Marco V - Indicator (Big fat remix), which is not a bad thing

Posted by _Marco_ on Jan-13-2002 15:29:

ok dg look the first page of this thread there is an flp file with the melody
Mantis to upload the flp just zip it , it must work
Haak thx for your opinion im the biggest marco v fan of france so...
but im working on this song to make it better ill upload the final version in a few days
thx all

Posted by mantisnl on Jan-13-2002 15:43:

ok thnx for the tip.. I`ve uploaded it,

here it is (right click, save as):

Made My Day (DJ Mantis Remix) Flp File

for the vocals.. I`ll upload them soon as possible

Greetz,

DJ Mantis

Posted by _Marco_ on Jan-13-2002 15:55:

thx man (a lot)
ho how did you put the id&t picture under your name?
Follow the good work

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