While i was in my state of total misery..

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Posted by Yevat on May-18-2001 00:41:

While i was in my state of total misery, because i had no internet to screw about on... i worked on music... merry christmas, im gonna go sleep now...please gimme abuse and critisizm...tata!:

http://www.envy.nu/yevatstorage/Ret...20The%20Past%20(XTC).mp3

Posted by ftnb on May-18-2001 02:11:

i'll dl it right after i finish getting this cosmicgate song. then ill give ya some criticsm on it

Posted by AnotherWay83 on May-18-2001 03:58:

d00d..

the link isn't working..

peace

Posted by mucka on May-18-2001 04:53:

completely dead!

Mr Positive

Posted by Anscoop on May-18-2001 05:43:

Nice song!

Posted by Peter Campbell on May-18-2001 06:08:

Yevat that link that you gave us , I don`t think it works .

Posted by Yevat on May-18-2001 07:55:

good god.... i should have checked it before i went to sleep!!! here, i upped it to the message board now, it should work here...

Posted by AnotherWay83 on May-18-2001 18:55:

er...

i don't c why FOUR ppl had to say the same thing after i'd already said it...

anyway, the song is pretty damn good yevat...neat job

peace

Posted by Yevat on May-18-2001 18:59:

Re: er...

quote:
Originally posted by AnotherWay83
i don't c why FOUR ppl had to say the same thing after i'd already said it...

LOL! true... i finished the song now by da way... ill up it tonight if anyone wants me to

Posted by Peter Campbell on May-18-2001 22:35:

Re: Re: er...

quote:
Originally posted by Yevat

LOL! true... i finished the song now by da way... ill up it tonight if anyone wants me to
Yea up it I need to have a beter listen .

Posted by Yevat on May-19-2001 02:06:

hi! here it is! i think i am gonna work on it more... there is a couple of things about it that i am not happy about yet, so it aint DONE done...if u know what i mean....
http://homepage.ntlworld.com/tavey....0The%20Past.MP3

Posted by Peter Campbell on May-19-2001 04:42:

I am downloading now , do you want us to give you a review you said that you haven`t finished

Posted by Yevat on May-19-2001 10:44:

hello! Trance God... um... was it me or did most of that not make any sense?... but i think i understand what ure sayin..lol!!! and no offense taken, im gonna do alot more on it.... im gonna try and put more pads in and change the melody and crap like that so blah...um... yeah dj pete...fire away!! hehehe

Posted by Peter Campbell on May-19-2001 13:46:

quote:
Originally posted by Yevat
hello! Trance God... um... was it me or did most of that not make any sense?... but i think i understand what ure sayin..lol!!! and no offense taken, im gonna do alot more on it.... im gonna try and put more pads in and change the melody and crap like that so blah...um... yeah dj pete...fire away!! hehehe
Ok I will tell you what I think in the morning I am off to bed now .

Posted by Dj Lex on May-19-2001 15:51:

Hey Yevat it's a nice catchy song. I am listening now and i must say I really like it.

Posted by Yevat on May-19-2001 16:38:

hello! thanx! um... dont get used to the melody... i changed it entirlety... much more catchier... and much more um... i dunno... there is a word for it i think...i dunno... i SHOULD be done with it either late tonight or early tomorrow morning... and ill replace it with the old file...

Posted by Peter Campbell on May-20-2001 02:51:

Ok Yevat I`ve had a good listen you getting some notes that clash at the 2 min mark when the 2 melodies come in , the one that has the 16 beat cord change then the 8 then 8 again is the ones out , go up a note higher after the 16 . I can`t read music I make all my music by ear , But its differently out . you have used the same notes later in the song to the buzzing sound I think . I don`t like that bassline , change the sound and make it louder and bring up the claps to ,

Over all the song format is proffesional but the sound image is poor { Fruityloops am I right } Good to see that your a taking my advice on having 2-3 things happening a once , but you have to get them notes right when you do this . These songs are the learning songs so keep them comming .

Posted by Yevat on May-21-2001 06:31:

ok... ive COMPLETELY finished now!! and the ong has been completely changed and i mean COMLETELY.... new bass, new melody, EVERYTHING..... i overwrote the old file cause i didnt have enough space to have 2 seperate files, so just use the same link again: http://homepage.ntlworld.com/tavey....0The%20Past.MP3

Posted by patticus on May-21-2001 08:28:

yevat im just about 2 min in, its catchy so far
but your synth or wahtever the fuck you call it, that comes in on the top line at about 1:30 or so, that three note line which repeats, moves up a minor third, and repeats

its in the wrong key.
move it DOWN one note (or half a step) (right now your base three notes for that synth line are B flat, A, D)
change that to A, A flat and D flat and you will find its in perfect harmony.

im sorry i forgot all the technical term bullshit, its really embarrassing after 12 yrs of intense classical music. half a note half a step/key whatever

i hope you understand what i mean. i'll give more criticism (constructive!) after listening to whole thing

Posted by patticus on May-21-2001 08:32:

i love how you fade in that melody (2:33) and stuff (other instruments, hi hats), as it crescendoes (builds up, basically, increasing in volume)

that's the kind of stuff i have no idea how to do w/ software. even though IMHO (seriously) my melodic chords and progressions are well polished.

does anyone want to collaborate with me?

i have no idea how, but trust me... with the amount of time i spend just "remixing" songs in my head, i think my skills would be beneficial to anyone with a good grasp of the software (dj pete?)
heh

icq 36738410

Posted by Yevat on May-21-2001 09:16:

LMFAO! i dont actually understand ANY music terms at all... so when u talk about middle C, chords, and notes and crap...im totally lost....but! i think i know what u are talking about... ill try and fix it, and see if it is what u are talking about, im at school right now so i have no real way of doing that...lol! and ive only been makin music for almost a year now....so that explains why i dont know much about the terms and stuff...hehehe, anyhow, thanx! anyone have more abuse and critisizm?...LOL!

Posted by Peter Campbell on May-21-2001 11:46:

Yevat these notes clash more on the orinagle , the bassline cord progression with the melody is way off , but it doesn`t matter its all a learning process , Perhaps you should get on ICQ with Patticus because I cant tell you a C from a D , all my work is done by ear . I think Patticus will help you out , I hope anyway . I see that BPM was up on the last and the sound image was a little better , but I still like the first mix of this song . Keep on trying .

Posted by Peter Campbell on May-21-2001 12:04:

quote:
Originally posted by patticus

does anyone want to collaborate with me?

(dj pete?)
heh

icq 36738410
A lot of people have asked me that already Patticus , but the thing is I just want to work with my self at the moment , If what I`am working at the moment takes off I want to produce some Vocal Trance or Eurodance so I will need a female vocal for this . But if there is any thing I can help you out on I will { software programs synths what ever } but I suppose we could do a project together if you want , you can do the notes cords and how you want the song to sound and I will produce it , then we will post it here on TA . My ICQ is 115192235

Posted by JayD on May-21-2001 12:56:

Can u put the 1st mix of this song up??? I was downloading it b-4 at 1 time but it was way to slow, put it up on a fast connection I would love to hear it... Damn, pretty good song, I dont really like the begining to much.. It sounds too much like the trance that 1st started off being produced in 94-95, but when the XTC around the 2:00 mark starts off, it starts sounding really decent... Good work

Posted by JayD on May-21-2001 13:01:

Bro the 1st mix of this song is definetly better, now thats some good ass work... I just listened to the clip you put up and that tune sounds really good, I would love to hear that 1... What I meant by you putting up the other tune, was the tune that you had up in another thread... Please put the other tune up, it sounds profesional .. The only thing I would say that needed to be changed for the 1st tune (the good one) is may-b make it a bit slower with a better background beat... Peace

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