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Posted by somnium on Jun-22-2003 20:23:

if they are so gay
cause they constantly wobble
what is 3 plus 2?

think about THAT

Posted by Orbax on Jun-22-2003 20:43:

Chewbacca, Wookie
Why does he live on Endor?
it doesnt make sense

Posted by Orbax on Jun-23-2003 01:59:

Silent broken church
Cliffside, ocean waves breaking
Sun spins into space

Posted by Trazedict on Jun-23-2003 02:28:

3 plus 2 is 8
according to the penguin
that loves to wobble

Posted by DJDigDug on Jun-23-2003 02:44:

Windows crash ah fuck,
Mp3 downloads gone, sux
Bill Gates he must die!

Pill Consumption joy!
I can hardly walk Oh boy!
Burnt brain, my fav game.

Posted by Paula on Jun-23-2003 03:09:

eh... i'll try...

too many to count
the times you betrayed my trust
you exist no more

Posted by the-un-named on Jun-23-2003 04:45:

Big nasty bugs crawl fast
Orkin man then sends a blast
now no bugs crawl fast

LOL

Posted by somnium on Jun-23-2003 07:40:

learn your penguins, mate!
3 plus 2 can not be 8!
like a sex machine.

Posted by Orbax on Jul-21-2003 05:01:

A fallen beer can
the sleeping pills are scattered
hand brushes carpet

Posted by astroboy on Jul-21-2003 05:39:

quote:
Originally posted by Orbax
A fallen beer can
the sleeping pills are scattered
hand brushes carpet

NICE!!
This is the way good haiku are supposed to be, the three lines are three seperate (non?)sentences with different subjects and objects, the link between them is indirect and thematic, or even vague and may not be immediately apparent, requiring a little thought to uncover. Thus you can achieve maximal expression in a minimum amount of words... this formal minimalism is, IMHO the essence of haiku

Posted by [ groovypants ] on Jul-21-2003 07:01:

I've always wondered about this Haiku stuff.
Hmmmm...

The darkness of white
Winter's snow covers the flow
Warmth is truely missed

Posted by PhloTron on Jul-21-2003 07:57:

The glass eye stares blank
Your socks are pink with blue dots
Tuna fish is swell

Posted by bloated_cow on Jul-21-2003 10:38:

Do you have coffee?
I have eaten your mother!
You really do fear me.

Posted by mos man on Jul-22-2003 11:50:

the haiku is rolling
more than a year to this day
when will it ever end

Posted by zamson on Jul-22-2003 12:41:

oh no haiku !!! bad memories from gradeschool

Posted by Orbax on Aug-01-2003 05:41:

a puddle of time
will you sink or will you float
our days without end

Posted by astroboy on Aug-01-2003 06:01:

Drop the LOL!
He shoudln't send the letter
Hope of love is doomed

Posted by astroboy on Aug-12-2003 01:55:

My funny horsey
My only friend in the world
Tomorrow you're glue

Posted by Orbax on Sep-19-2003 05:21:

yoink

Posted by Orbax on Nov-18-2003 00:54:

rawr

Posted by niteshayde on Aug-17-2004 00:11:

so i thought why not
write another haiku poem
tis been far too long

Posted by -=M=- on Aug-17-2004 00:36:

omg only just found this thread - me and my mates during work just email each other... lots of haikus get made this is just a compilation of a few of them... not in any particular order but some are in response to others

No phones here for me
I listen to Sahara
Saviour: Solid Globe

God damn all you guys
I really need a ciggy
Save me from the phones!

Bwain has been bwoken
Someone buy some super glue
Or make me coffee

My epiphany
I had at work suddenly
Trance just saves the day!

Brain mush splat gurgle
Cant be assed writing
another haiku

I am drinking tea
It is a diaretic
I have to go pee

It was always me
All along I was right here
I was the turkey!

Where you get pizza bitch?
Maybe meet you there @ lunch?
Pizza sounds good mMMMmm.

Stfu ****
You want a lift home or not?
Fkn sif dis me

Please don�t be scared nick,
Its not my fault you lack dick,
You should see to it

listen wet ankles:
this line seven syllables
top and bottom: five

my stomach now cries
feed me, feed me, feed me, ****!
Coke is calling me

Haiku not sushi
I wish if only it was
Then words I would eat

Afternoon death looms,
Worse than morning death I say,
Hunger gnaws through gut.

I have none either;
Just some whimsical musings
Of a hungry mind

I am quite starving,
no muffins, cupcakes, cookies,
I be envious. =(

I like chocolate
Muffins, cupcakes and cookies
They make me happy

Morn'n death creeps slowly,
And softly hurts mushy brain,
Woe is this day... woe.

Posted by Eddie N MIAMI on Aug-17-2004 00:40:

The birds fly up high
right on top of us
doing shit on us

i actually used that as one of my poems in highschool english class,teacher made a book of our poems and mines was in the 1st page haha.
replace shit with poop of course

Posted by Mr. Pink on Aug-17-2004 00:41:

Just to let everyone know....

a Haiku specifically pertains to nature.....any sort of 3 line poem with 5-7-5 syllable count pertaining to NATURE.

a SENRYU (sp?) is a 3 line 5-7-5 count- but about anything in general.

Posted by {b.s.e.} on Aug-17-2004 00:43:

uh,

floating asteroid
need to buy some school supplies
you're soaking in it..

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