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Posted by ONION on Jul-12-2004 03:28:

ok, i will be as honest as possible.....

There are some very good parts to your tracks... and theres some very very ordinary cheesy parts to your track.

Good:

* pads
* percussion
* bassline
* the key change in the bassline
* SOME sfx ( note not all )

Crap:

* Leadline
* Cheesy sounds / melodies ( not your pads )
* Break is awful ( especially the breakbeat crap )

Sumarry:

I wouldnt buy / play this... having said that you are very talented, especially if this is a first tune... well done on a great effort... Try to make your melodies subtle, spacey and tight... you need to work a bit on your sequencing too...

Keep up the good work : )

Posted by soundrush on Jul-12-2004 06:28:

thanks guys...

@ onion... im not 100% pleased with the lead and im working on that already...

Posted by danxxx on Jul-13-2004 13:01:

Absolutely stunning tune. Really enjoyed this one, very proffesional sound. I really can't think of anything to critic...
As to the sounds sounding cheesy as someone said, they are wrong!

Posted by Magnus on Jul-13-2004 14:41:

soundrush very impressed! This is your very first track or just your first one sharing with us? And secondly, this was created 100% in Reason? Very, very nice work.

Posted by Dance123 on Jul-14-2004 00:10:

Hi Soudrush,

The production in your tune is really good I think. I believe there are many club labels in Germany, so you should be able to find one! Good luck!!

I also have a request for you. I really like that "splashy" clap sound you use in your track. Would it be possible to upload that sample for me! I would really appreciate it! Thanks!

PS: if you have no upload space, please let me know so I can help you with that!

Posted by Sebraa on Jul-14-2004 09:16:

Cool track but work with the LEAD sound more before sending to labels, right now they would say -> NOT BAD AT ALL and thats all BASSLINE and PERCUSSION -> TOP NOTCH!!! Breakbeat is not good, hurts my ear comparing with rest of the song! But defo good one

Posted by Aerodrome on Jul-14-2004 14:01:

Pretty nice track I think. I really like the build up, nice atmosphere. But I'm not a big fan of your lead, it could use some more power. After the break it collapses a bit i think, it should 'banging' a bit more in the climax. But over all it's a really professional track with a nice atmosphere but I think it could use some improvements.

Posted by soundrush on Jul-17-2004 06:18:

a sample of the final version has been uploaded. no need for feedback anymore. thanks for the help.

cheers, niklas

Posted by Timothy on Jul-19-2004 17:38:

Have you allready signed the track or are you still planning?

Posted by Stino on Jul-19-2004 20:39:

link isnt working...

Posted by Woody4eva on Jul-20-2004 11:57:

Well I would disagree with Orion and say that I like your breaks. The pads are awesome and the bass is top notch.

Overall: 8/10

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