Peter Safranyos - Untitled (Original Mix)

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Posted by Mycron on Nov-13-2004 23:40:

quote:
Originally posted by BrownTA4Life
hey man!
i really think that this is a great track and it does remind me of Robert Nicksons work, i cant wait to here the whole thing and i look forward to listen to ur upcoming prductions. keep up the good work

thanks, Minjah!

i'm glad you like it

Posted by DjCommisad on Nov-14-2004 00:02:

quote:
Originally posted by Niklas Harding
quality melody, some work needs to be done tweaking sound wise.. but
im sure it will get there! this sounds really good!

finish it pete, and give a copy to this nut so he can play it in vancouver and i can be like, OMG ITS PETE's TRACK!!! and go crazy with the dancing!

Posted by DjCommisad on Nov-14-2004 00:03:

btw, it does need tweaking. low end imho. tweak that kick/clap too.

Posted by Mycron on Nov-14-2004 00:09:

quote:
Originally posted by DjCommisad
finish it pete, and give a copy to this nut so he can play it in vancouver and i can be like, OMG ITS PETE's TRACK!!! and go crazy with the dancing!

when will Nik plays in Vancouver?

i hope he will play the vocal version of the track there...

Posted by teknasia on Nov-14-2004 00:46:

again, a nice production!

very uplifting

niiice break!! but indeed, you could put some more variation in the melody and maybe u can tweak you're bassline so it would pump with the kick

great work!

Posted by Mycron on Nov-23-2004 09:29:

quote:
Originally posted by teknasia
again, a nice production!

very uplifting

niiice break!! but indeed, you could put some more variation in the melody and maybe u can tweak you're bassline so it would pump with the kick

great work!

thanks for your comments, mate

i just reworked the bassline, a bit, and did some tweaking on the whole tune, hopefully it might got better,

and currently working on the vocal mix

Posted by JohnOC on Nov-23-2004 11:41:

wooooh...i really really liked the melody on this one. could be a really big tune, i didnt like the portamento/glide melody though

dude get this to some labels and they may organise some top remix for it and release it. the melody is good enough to make it out there

Posted by Demilio on Nov-23-2004 16:45:

Nice

Nice song.. need some work but realy nice melody.. try a female vocal on it.. or.. why not a male.. hehe..

bad things :

-Your kick it not good.. to low.. it need more punch!
-You need to make the song more pushing.. lift it more.. try using more rythm's.. it can have something to do with the mastering..
-As I always say.. make it more original.. make music so people know its you.. make people recognise your song.. a good example is yahel - voyage

Keep it up

Posted by Mycron on Nov-25-2004 09:37:

Re: Nice

quote:
Originally posted by Demilio
Nice song.. need some work but realy nice melody.. try a female vocal on it.. or.. why not a male.. hehe..

bad things :

-Your kick it not good.. to low.. it need more punch!
-You need to make the song more pushing.. lift it more.. try using more rythm's.. it can have something to do with the mastering..
-As I always say.. make it more original.. make music so people know its you.. make people recognise your song.. a good example is yahel - voyage

Keep it up

hehe, yeah the lyrics for the vocal version are already finished, just need to re-record again the vocals, to get a bit better quality, and then completed,

btw, thanks for your comments, im going to add some little more changes on the tune to get a bit better,

and also making the follow-up of this track

cheers,
Peter

Posted by Mycron on Feb-19-2005 16:23:

hey guys,

i uploaded a sample of the final version of the instrumental mix, it's unmastered, though, but i hope you will like it!

any feedbacks would be much appreciated

thanks for listening to it,

Peter

Posted by J.L. on Feb-19-2005 16:44:

things to work on:

right now, the kick is not punchy... it has this trailing bass that makes it lose it's punch...

the bass is muddy to my ears (not the one that comes in at 1:50)

things i enjoyed:

the track is dreamy and atmospheric... the melody is hypnotic and beautiful

the track flows well....

melodic components are complimenting each other well

great track

Posted by josh on Feb-19-2005 16:45:

potential. Get the master done.

The kick can be more punchy.. Nice work man!

Cheers!

Posted by Synchronix on Feb-19-2005 17:19:

hey pete,

nice track buddy. i like the melody line. it's very flowing. the only improvement i can think of would be to add something extra-original, because you have a solid track at this point, but it doesn't sound like anything i haven't heard before. Add a couple things to give it a unique touch and you have a real winner on your hands!

Posted by icexx on Feb-19-2005 18:26:

i dont like it.

it just seems really amature to me, and the main melody at the start kinda made my head hurt as it got really annoying.

not makin fun of u or anything just letting you know what i thought when i heard it.

check out my track and lemme know what u think about it.

http://www.soundclick.com/util/Stre...ID=2107943&q=hi

Posted by tylerc on Feb-19-2005 21:25:

sounds really good so far man, i like it. definitely has a pro sound. some vocals would go nice with this, but i think it would be really easy to overdo it and make this tune super cheesy, so be careful. the melody does get pretty repetitive after a while, but the vocals should help that. i might tweak that bass at 1:50 a lil to try and soften it, as its a little 'hard' i guess would be the word. i like the little fx thing before it comes in.

nice work.

Posted by Peter K on Feb-19-2005 23:40:

This track doesn't do it for me, I don't like that melody very much, but I guess its just a matter of taste.
A good production tho, keep it up.

Posted by Mycron on Feb-20-2005 08:54:

quote:
Originally posted by kewlness
things to work on:

right now, the kick is not punchy... it has this trailing bass that makes it lose it's punch...

the bass is muddy to my ears (not the one that comes in at 1:50)

things i enjoyed:

the track is dreamy and atmospheric... the melody is hypnotic and beautiful

the track flows well....

melodic components are complimenting each other well

great track

thanks for the kind words, jean-luc,

your suggestions are always much appreciated, mate

i'm gonna do some final tweak and eqing on the bass,

cheers,

Peter

Posted by Jay M on Feb-20-2005 13:19:

You know what i think of this, pure quality! Let's hope the vocals are in there soon, and I'll be delivering a (hopefully) worthy remix

Keep m coming!

Posted by Expher on Feb-20-2005 13:55:

Sounds pretty neat, it has a nice feeling - kinda euforia. I will write down some dots that might be to your help...

- A more punchy bass would be great
- Do not forget postwork on this one, a good mastering's essential
- Spontainiously overall good synths
- Strings/pad could be improved
- I do not like the delay on the open hihat
- Cool lead, sounds pretty "new"
- Great work

Posted by Mycron on Feb-20-2005 17:34:

quote:
Originally posted by Expher
Sounds pretty neat, it has a nice feeling - kinda euforia. I will write down some dots that might be to your help...

- A more punchy bass would be great
- Do not forget postwork on this one, a good mastering's essential
- Spontainiously overall good synths
- Strings/pad could be improved
- I do not like the delay on the open hihat
- Cool lead, sounds pretty "new"
- Great work

thanks, Johan

i will make some fixes on the pads, just bring it a bit more upfront, and will take a look on that hihat, i like it, though,

anyway, thanks for your comment!

Posted by krivi on Feb-20-2005 22:45:

this is great stuff man...
i would just work on variations through the track and i think kick is weak...try to avoid equalisation of open hihat...

Posted by Mycron on Feb-21-2005 17:56:

quote:
Originally posted by krivi
this is great stuff man...
i would just work on variations through the track and i think kick is weak...try to avoid equalisation of open hihat...

thanks krivi,

i like that kick, but yeah its true i should make it more sharper, punchier, and cut down some bass of it, hope it will helps,

about the open hihat, i pretty much like it, but maybe too much delay on it yeah, will be fixed soon,

thanks

Posted by Blue Sky 99 on Feb-21-2005 19:07:

Hi Peter,

First, nice track! I listened to the sample a couple of times and I kept on liking it so that's a good thing! The only thing that started to bother me was that the melody became to repetive ... but that is already said a few times before me

Overall this track has some potential I think!
Great work!

I still had a question about the vocal remix: will the vocals be male or female?

Posted by wrzonance on Feb-21-2005 19:56:

The hats sound better than other stuff I've heard today. Kick sounds alright.

I like your melodies with the most present synth. The string accomp sounds nice too. I like how this track flows.

Not sure if I like your bass. Sounds like a bassline I'd make, which IMO isn't very good usually

Work on your bass. I like everything in the song practically, except my bass, probably cuz I'm getting flashbacks and scaring myself.

Good work overal man, I really like it. KEEEEP ITT TUPPP!

Posted by 2)Ser on Feb-21-2005 19:59:

i didnt quite feel any good progression in the beginning. and also the bass felt a little too dry to me. a really nice abstract sounding song though.

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