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Posted by Cause & Effect on Dec-01-2005 13:54:

holy shit thats a nice tune. Like the lead synthy noise lots.

nice tight percs.

Good stuff.


Posted by Jay M on Dec-01-2005 22:20:

Re: Nice Tune

quote:
Originally posted by clubkilla
One small suggestion. Its too long and the bass overpowers the kick drum


These are two suggestions

I think the overpowering is because of the 96 kbps you heard..?
It's lengthy maybe but that's not really my concern atm, plenty of room to mix. Thanks for the suggestions tho!!


Posted by Jay M on Dec-01-2005 23:11:

Re: Ok, one more suggestion

quote:
Originally posted by clubkilla
Think about adding or replacing one of the melody sounds with one thats a bit darker or more edgy, its going to make the softer stuff more floaty and at the same time put a punch into the beat. Actually maybe even lowering the pitch or transpose. But definetly something on the bottom so it can drive the beat more. For somereason i don't think your base is really driving. Just try it anyways. what have you got to lose.


I understand what you mean. These could be solving the lack of drive in the track. And putting more contrasts let's things stand out better..., but I think I'd be better off trying that in new tracks. Changing things I like atm is not always good I learned. Let's keep it at it that the combo's in this one aren't regular..

Thanks for your time and suggestions clubkilla, appreciated!


Posted by TOR on Dec-02-2005 19:05:

perfect!


Posted by Jay M on Dec-03-2005 13:12:

quote:
Originally posted by TOR
perfect!


Thank you.


Posted by Nemesis44 on Dec-03-2005 13:42:

That is a nice track and I agree with the 70's feel, it's funky though.
Not sure about the bassline. Not because I don't like it, but it does feel a little awkward with the overall feel of the song. Whilst the rest of the song is really slick it seems to plod a little too much.

As I said, I can't fault you production wise as this is really nice just not 100% convinced about the overall result. But that is only personal opinion and not bassed on technical merit.

Good job

Cheers
Nem


Posted by Jay M on Dec-04-2005 12:00:

quote:
Originally posted by Nemesis44
That is a nice track and I agree with the 70's feel, it's funky though.
Not sure about the bassline. Not because I don't like it, but it does feel a little awkward with the overall feel of the song. Whilst the rest of the song is really slick it seems to plod a little too much.

As I said, I can't fault you production wise as this is really nice just not 100% convinced about the overall result. But that is only personal opinion and not bassed on technical merit.

Good job

Cheers
Nem


Thanks Nem,

Though I will have a final look over it all to get rid of flawed things.. technical flaws that is


Posted by Bono Vox on Dec-04-2005 12:45:

Smile

I really like your productions. Just as I enjoyed your remix Of "Fall To Pieces" - this one is very good too. It could be a bit shorter maybe, but it's still a very enjoyable listening. Looking forward to your next works!


Posted by sooper on Dec-04-2005 21:51:

Hey Jay!

This is sooooooooooooo good.

It's got a very unique kind of uplifting feeling I haven't heard in too many songs before. You've got tons of creativity it must even be squeaking out in your farts

I love the melodies and the vibe.. I've got nothing to suggest - this is top notch stuff and that funky bass tickles my balls.

Good stuff buddy!
Trev


Posted by djsphere on Dec-04-2005 22:26:

got it signed yet?


Posted by Luke Terry on Dec-05-2005 18:53:



good stuff mate, this definately has the full sound you are capable of


Posted by Loraine on Dec-05-2005 19:08:

As stated on Clubcharts: I this track ! Keep those choons coming, Jeroen !!


Posted by Jay M on Dec-06-2005 10:31:

Thaaaanks everyone!

quote:
Originally posted by djsphere
got it signed yet?


Nope, will send out with either another new track or a couple of remixes or so.


Posted by djsphere on Dec-06-2005 11:14:

quote:
Originally posted by Jay M
Nope, will send out with either another new track or a couple of remixes or so.


good luck with that


Posted by Speactra on Dec-06-2005 21:35:

This is great! Sounds great when you make that pitch change at 2.05 in the www cut. Maybe some more drums?
Like the bassline very much!
Love the name on the track, it makes the atmosphere even better. Got's me thinking of blue skies, and a very coloured airbaloon!
Thanks for sharing.


Posted by thoughtlessjex on Dec-08-2005 19:54:

I'm liking the bass here.

This one has a real housey feel, especially to the accomaniment synth.

Pitch bends are cool.

Good work, man. I like the mood here.


Posted by Pinokio on Dec-09-2005 03:48:

Downloading Mate


Posted by Flash Bastard on Dec-09-2005 12:18:

NETJES !!

yeah i like this song, i could use this in one of my sets for sure, the bad this is the break is abit long but imo not realy a problem.


Posted by Arctic Breeze on Dec-09-2005 12:48:

The offbeat conga (?), the bassline and the crunchy percussion reminds me of some Oliver Lieb production. The little lazer fx @ 1:24 could use some delay imo. But I love your tune, very isos'ish! And the name, perfect!


Posted by Jay M on Dec-10-2005 12:59:

Hi thanks all! Newest sample is playing at my site, check it out if it interests you.


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