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Posted by funkysouls on Feb-13-2006 07:54:

wat all u use Ryan..?


Posted by globalwarming on Feb-13-2006 12:18:

quote:
Originally posted by Rayan
hm. Thank you for great reviews and. I got those samples



then use them!!!


Posted by gr8ape on Feb-13-2006 14:16:

The first breakdown gave me goosebumps


Posted by Stu Cox on Feb-13-2006 15:13:

Not a bad effort, I'm afraid I did find the oboe lead very cheesy but I think you pull it off quite well, as well as can be expected anyway!

I think everyone else has covered just about all I was going to say - yeah the top end perc seems to have slightly too much there or just has an uneven groove to it which makes it sound a bit too racey. Production-wise the rest of the track is quite good, levels all sound right etc

The triplet bit in the bassline I think's an excellent idea and sounds really good at the start but doesn't quite fit with the track imo - I think when everything else is in there it adds to the uneven feel of the perc and makes it sound a little bit like it's tripping over itself.

5.5/10

(Mark scale: 0 Give Up, 1-3 Gonna take some more work, 4-5 Nearly there, 6-8 Signable, 9-10 Outstanding)


Posted by Rayan on Feb-13-2006 16:35:

thanks for reviews

Stu Cox: I know what you mean about the cheesy lead. but the whole deal with this song is that the oboe is the main melodie. its just to make it deeper, and better ath. And.. got some clips I could here from you? you sound like a pro


Posted by avengie on Feb-13-2006 16:39:

I like the emotion of the track.... overall, its very cool.... i like the way you had the pads arranged.... impressive


Posted by Stu Cox on Feb-13-2006 16:40:

I haven't finished a track for ages, I'm definately not a pro Just haven't been able to sit down and work at anything for long enough recently

There are samples of some of my older tracks on the studio section of my site: www.stucox.co.uk/studio.htm... but as I say, haven't done anything for ages.

And anything I say when I'm commenting on a track is just my opinion... re. the oboe, I appreciate that's the whole point of the track, but it's just not really for me.


Posted by Rayan on Feb-13-2006 16:44:

hehe. yeah. I understand. Its just a "sign" of my music. I have found my own style! so that style fit someone out there, and some not!

Thanks again!

appreciate the review


Posted by JoeyEnv on Feb-13-2006 16:44:

Man, i'm really digging Scandinavian trance at the minute, you guys rock the floor at Driving/Uplifting. This one gave me the chills. It's immense. The Oboe is extraordinary and is totally original in trance. Some of the keys are a wee bit static and I think it needs more higher key variation but the novelty is there. The percs are awesome and the atmosphere is quality. An it's looooooooooooooooooong. I'm at 8.36 now and it seems like it's building again. Ha, awesome.

I think Stu has ultra high standards because this one would be banging to spin.


Posted by Rayan on Feb-13-2006 21:01:

JoeyEnv: thank you!! This was very great to hear :P Love to hear that people like my music. yeah. its a bit long! But.. It will be better!

doing a new track now. Think it will be cool!


Posted by Arctic Breeze on Feb-14-2006 15:00:

I agree with the guy who said this was a bit cheesy, but it's allright, I like it. It's good. It lacks the final touch to make it very good.


Posted by Illumin on Feb-14-2006 17:58:

Wow....I really liked this track. And I do like the oboe lead, definitely what I like to hear (I don't even mind the lengthiness either, or at least not now). Nothing more really that I can point out that has already been said, so GREAT JOB!!!


Posted by JoeyEnv on Feb-14-2006 18:42:

quote:
Originally posted by Rayan
JoeyEnv: thank you!! This was very great to hear :P Love to hear that people like my music. yeah. its a bit long! But.. It will be better!

doing a new track now. Think it will be cool!


your welcome my friend.


Posted by DjFabeD on Feb-21-2006 20:01:

Thumbs up

VERY NICE TRACK MAN !!



GOOD GOOD GOOD


Posted by Rayan on Feb-21-2006 22:06:

thanks dj fabed, and all of you other ones!!

This song is now officially not to get anymore!

Because it will aybe get signed. I have added Opera, new strings, more melody etc. Like you said I shuld! Thanks for all... realy helps.
thanks for all the great reviews!

Cheers!


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