[Trance] Barry Kane - Birth (160 kbps) sample

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Posted by sterilis on Mar-26-2006 17:32:

the original is still being worked on mate. ill have it finished soon.

cheers for the feedback!

Posted by Nomen Nescio on Mar-26-2006 21:36:

Hey mate,

Just listened to your track. You are improving indeed as a producer. Bass and kick and percs are a lot better already. Also you are not making three tracks in one track anymore

What I still think is lacking is a good general direction in which you want to take the track. It feels like during the build up you don't know what you want to do yet. there are hardly melodic elements so it does not really hook. You could use some elements of during the lead to prepare us more for the hook that you want to create.

The lead you are using is a lot better and more original than in other tracks of yours. I quite like it, also the melody is a lot better. Still when all elements are in place the track lacks depth and energy but I can hear your improvements mate so keep it up.

Cheers,

Nomen nescio

Posted by sterilis on Mar-27-2006 10:20:

cheers nomen

hopefully the original mix will be an improvement on this again.

thanks!

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