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lol! by the way, did the song ever work on ure machine, Lynx?

JESUS CHRIST!!! I HATE MY COMPUTER!!!!! Everytime i tried to upload the fucking thing, its cancelled itself off at about 80% and said "nope sorry cant upload... ure fault" !!!! FUCKING THING!!!!! took almost 6 hours!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! its up now!! fucking hell... just click the same link again as it was before, different file... i took out the silences and crap, shanged the bass hats, and crap like that, and it now sounds more open and clearer... tell me if it is better...bye bye!!!


http://yevatmusic.webjump.com/Yevat...he%20Future.MP3

nice song man!

although i think in the next track you make try to find more uniqe melody... but the song realy nice!
i make trackz to and i want to know - you said you use this program but you dont use it with some keybord?
i use "I - 3 keybord synthy by KORG" and also a modul by ROLAND - a groovbox ( mc - 508 )...

thanx! nope, only use the TS404 that comes with the program and the Pro-52 from Native Instruments.. only software VSTi instruments

ok, i heard you 2nd attempt
didnt hear too much of a difference
except for the quiet part, that became better
still not too bad



ADK

well i ddnt actually change that much more then the silences, but if u listen to the first attempt and the second side by side, they have "sightley" different sounds to them... kinda hard to notice...but they are there! anyhow, thanx!

By the way, Lynx, did the file work this time?... i know the last time u tried to download it didnt like ure computer and didnt play, just wondering if it did this time.

Yevat I have just listen to your song , The songs sound image is produced nicely , your song writing needs a little work ,

I have read the posts about the parts were it gose silent , your on the right track and it think that you were trying to make a filter sweep in them parts , also the off beat bassline needs to play a cord progression that move with the melodi , Also you need to have more things happening not just a small fast one that you have ,

Trance music has sometimes 3 cords or melodies playing at onece and they are not all ways not them same notes . What you have got there is only a half finsihed track .

What I would do is since that your melodi plays for 16 beats , have another one that plays for 32 over it than bring in some pads , pads are the carpet for a song that really fill in the gapes and gives it a nice feel , and how about a Bassline cord progerssion that moves with the melodi .

I`am just trying to help out

hey DJ Pete!!! THANK U THANK U THANK U!!!! THATS EXACTALLY THE KINDA CRTITSIZM I WANT!!! THANX!! IM GONNA TRY AND DO WHAT U SAID IN THE NEXT SONG... I UNDERSTAND WHA U MEAN BUT NEVER REALLY REALISED IT TILL NOW! :0) IM WORKIN ON THE NEW TRACK NOW, SHOULD BE DONE IN A COUPLE DAYS... THANX AGAIN!

oops... just noticed the caps!! lol!!! sorry!

yes, dj pete really seems to know something about making you own trance-music.
do u make music yourself, DJ pete?


ADK

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Originally posted by DJ Pete it think that you were trying to make a filter sweep in them parts

can ya tell me what a filter sweep is?...lol!! like Rank1 - Airwave?

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Originally posted by ADK yes, dj pete really seems to know something about making you own trance-music. do u make music yourself, DJ pete? ADK

ADK yes I am currently working on 4 songs , Three of which will be used as demos for a recording contract , the other one is just a small project that I will post here for you all to listen because so many people have asked to hear my music to see if I really know what I am talking about , it not as good as the other ones but it will give you a good ider of what i can produce , I`ve been working on it all week with about 1 week left before I`am finished . Yevat you might want to listen to it to . I will post it in this thread call New Trance Artist .

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Originally posted by Yevat can ya tell me what a filter sweep is?...lol!! like Rank1 - Airwave?

A filter sweep is used in all most dance music it can add variety without changing you notes . What I mean by Filter Is a Low pass or a High Pass , they mean exactly what they say only let certain pich of music through . for a low pass filter which is most commonly used it would sound like this a cord or melodi is playing than when you slowly use the filter you will hear the pich of the notes slow being cut out makeing it sound lower and lower the more you apply , because you were filtering out the the pich . I hop this helps

i know exactaly what u mean, thanx. :0) ive used that in some other songs, but for some reason used only volume control in the new song. ill use it in the new on though. :0) I should probably also use a Phaser to bring in a new sound...

for ppl that heard the last one (like ADK) here is a sample of the new one, do u like this melody better?

do u have any critisizm...?

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Originally posted by DJ Pete ADK yes I am currently working on 4 songs , Three of which will be used as demos for a recording contract , the other one is just a small project that I will post here for you all to listen because so many people have asked to hear my music to see if I really know what I am talking about , it not as good as the other ones but it will give you a good ider of what i can produce , I`ve been working on it all week with about 1 week left before I`am finished . Yevat you might want to listen to it to . I will post it in this thread call New Trance Artist .

can't wait to hear you!
what do you use to make your music?
i also working on some trackz with I3 KEYBORD and mudol groovebox (mc 508) and some hardwere midi progrem on the computer...
when you gonna post your trackz?

Hi Yevat. I've just given your track a listen. Right now I'd say it has the makings of a good song but at the moment it isn't particularly that good. I have to be honest, the melody gets pretty irratating. You're repeating it over and over again too much with absolutely no variation or progression.

DJ Pete was on to something when he said you should use some pads in there. You definitely need to add some pads. And filter sweeps would be nice. Basically, you need to fill it up because what you've got at the moment is a simple 4x4 beat, hi hats, a one note bass and melody drifting over the top which doesn't particularly maintain the interest no matter how good the melody is.

I'm not saying my tracks are better, in fact I think they're pretty awful, but when I approach a track, my mentality is always to hold a listener's interest. I'll do this by making the bassline progressive by filtering it along the way, distorting it etc or fiddling around with the beat a bit say at the end of every 8 bars so it isn't just 4 kick drums in a row continously. I'm a big fan of BT and I just love the way there's just so much going on his songs that you hear something new every time. Also, Bedrock have a good thing going with the percussion they use. Just take a listen to Heaven Scent. At the end of almost every 1st bar there's just a little kind of tribal sound. It's a little something but adds to it nonetheless.

The silence in the track also needs some work yeah. Maybe instead of simply decreasing the volume of the melody, decrease it and at the same time overlap it with pads or something that will let the listener know that the volume control hasnt just gone crazy on their computer.

Ok, well I hope that helps. On a plus side, your knowledge of the structure of dance tunes seems good. And once you beef up your track, that melody will sound a lot better.

Chris

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