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i dont know why u guys are lying to this guy and saying his track is pure quality. stop lying to this guy.
he needs to work on his production.
ill give it to you like any record label will tell you.
this track is basically useless and it sounds amature. im not gonna be like the rest of ur buddys here and say is quality when its garbage.
just keep producing and make something better and more pro.
gl
the lead synth is definately very cool sounding
but the melody bothers me after a while... like others have said: too repitative
bass volumes can be bumped up a lot... track is lacking on lowend
would be cool to see how this turns out 
another well-produced piece of art of the hungarianboy! 
really nice track m8! can't wait for the vocals 
the break is soooo freakin' dreamy!! Your synths are also very clear! maybe you could add a mid-freq synth to fill it up? dunno 
Made this with reason???
cheerz m8!
This track is really great. The melodies are nice. Maybe work a bit on your bass. Adding more percussions wouldn't be a bad idea imo. Nice FX you made 
u definitely got your own style alright...
this starts out much better than your other track, greater percussions and drive here.. break, i like the notes of the basslines, some more low end could do, maybe.. after the break, the kick doesnt feel right.. or the low freq or something like that.. sounds alright, but u need to work on your basslines dood.. 
Awesome !
Finish this and it will be a hit 
thanks a lot for the comments,
anyway i updated the track with better bassline and lead,
you can check out the updated version, here
Peter Safranyos - Cloudland (sample)
cheers,
Peter
Hey Man
Nice tune you got here - although I find the hi-hats strange a bit. SOunds are nice, but I think it could do with a bit more bass, to give the song a wider sound.
Melody is nice, I wouldn't say it bored me, but it's nothing I haven't heard before.
Production is good and clear, overall great tune.
sounds really good my friend!! love the melodies! you are improving a lot
but you still have to work on the bassline man... add some more low frequenties, eq it a little
cheers,
Renco
final sample here, for those, who interested listening to it, maybe:
Peter Safranyos - Cloudland (sample)
cheers,
Peter
Pure spirit in this tunes man.
Well, still waiting. will do.
C ya �=o) snowave
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| Originally posted by Snowave Pure spirit in this tunes man. Well, still waiting. will do. C ya �=o) snowave |
i like this alot. that bassline sounds alot like ATB - Ecstacy. but i still love this song.
Im hooked on that lead man, nice work.
All those notes going along with each other, may sound messy at times but it works imo.
I would layer a low sub-bassline (in the form of a string) to make the track more emotional and powerful.
Plus sweeping/panning wind fx lightly in the background to add more atmosphere (do the same for the build up, panned fx left to right).
The breakdown is in need of more powerful strings to make it more dramatic (again a low sub-bassline in a form of a string to accompany the main bassline).
A warp fx, more elements, etc, right before the breakdown ends to add more anticipation and tension (same idea applied right before the build up ends and the breakdown begins).
-Kenidel Lopez
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| Originally posted by Kenidel Lopez Im hooked on that lead man, nice work. All those notes going along with each other, may sound messy at times but it works imo. I would layer a low sub-bassline (in the form of a string) to make the track more emotional and powerful. Plus sweeping/panning wind fx lightly in the background to add more atmosphere (do the same for the build up, panned fx left to right). The breakdown is in need of more powerful strings to make it more dramatic (again a low sub-bassline in a form of a string to accompany the main bassline). A warp fx, more elements, etc, right before the breakdown ends to add more anticipation and tension (same idea applied right before the build up ends and the breakdown begins). -Kenidel Lopez |

Hey I heard the new version and it's awesome, totally melodic and uplifting, great tune mate
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Kopi =o.
Hey man, I like alot the breakdown, u always got nice melodies and stuff, ur bass is very cool also, dont forget to send me the ful version
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Kopi =o.
you rock !
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