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Posted by shanny on Jan-03-2007 18:51:

The Epic Battle

O�er the valley don the foggy haze fell, Yes a battle would be held this day. Not o�er freedom or peace, not o�er citizenship or even love.

This battle, epic as a battle could be was o�er satisfaction.

Two sides were never so evenly matched as these two who ruled over the valley don.

On one side King J-O-N, a ravishing blue eyed chap, thought he had the answer for supreme satisfaction.

Then his rival, evil prince Car-Ney, who thumbed his nose at the fair king.

So on this foggy morning, the two leaders lead their two forces to line the hill tops along the valley don.

King J-O-N rode through the streets and called his followers to the fight.
�Line up your troops, we�re going to war!�

Car-Ney, quieter by nature took his battle position knowing he had the secret weapon at hand.

And there they stood, two armies, united in desire, divided in belief.

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-updated, see further up this page for where the story stands translated vs. not translated and the translation guide


Posted by TranceGrooves on Jan-03-2007 19:49:

The Epic Battle

O�er the valley don the foggy haze fell, Yes a battle would be held this day. Not o�er freedom or peace, not o�er citizenship or even love.

This battle, epic as a battle could be was o�er satisfaction.

Two sides were never so evenly matched as these two who ruled over the valley don.

On one side King J-O-N, a ravishing blue eyed chap, thought he had the answer for supreme satisfaction.

Then his rival, evil prince Car-Ney, who thumbed his nose at the fair king.

So on this foggy morning, the two leaders lead their two forces to line the hill tops along the valley don.

King J-O-N rode through the streets and called his followers to the fight.
�Line up your troops, we�re going to war!�

Car-Ney, quieter by nature took his battle position knowing he had the secret weapon at hand.

And there they stood, two armies, united in desire, divided in belief.

King J-O-N rode his horse to the middle and his troops followed.


Posted by shanny on Jan-04-2007 04:46:

The Epic Battle

O�er the valley don the foggy haze fell, Yes a battle would be held this day. Not o�er freedom or peace, not o�er citizenship or even love.

This battle, epic as a battle could be was o�er satisfaction.

Two sides were never so evenly matched as these two who ruled over the valley don.

On one side King J-O-N, a ravishing blue eyed chap, thought he had the answer for supreme satisfaction.

Then his rival, evil prince Car-Ney, who thumbed his nose at the fair king.

So on this foggy morning, the two leaders lead their two forces to line the hill tops along the valley don.

King J-O-N rode through the streets and called his followers to the fight.
�Line up your troops, we�re going to war!�

Car-Ney, quieter by nature took his battle position knowing he had the secret weapon at hand.

And there they stood, two armies, united in desire, divided in belief.

King J-O-N rode his horse to the middle and his troops followed.

Car-Ney�s evil minions began to charge inwards, but low and behold J-O-N had a trick.

A giant flag he raised, which stopped the forces of Car-Ney dead in their tracks.

For the flag had a checkered pattern so beautiful it had frozen them.

This was their satisfaction.


Posted by *~LiSa-LoO~* on Jan-04-2007 05:19:

Inkip supernal mocamba golly yipsh franklin guilooteen polka truelh ikish polish tulipismo bovuley santeeno Arti-Tyip�s hip.

=

It appeared as though the King had won, for there was little movement amongst Car-Ney�s troops.


Posted by English Rachel on Jan-04-2007 13:41:

R ber woly condoooctor yipper, yipsh two avgockin rasmutin yoksh two hypothermial goosage setrin yipsh trillian asankat mcgregor yipsh snipes gerdernit.



So on this foggy morning, the two leaders lead their two forces to line the hill tops along the valley Don.


Posted by Zeidoo on Jan-04-2007 13:53:

The rabbit in the moon.


Posted by shanny on Jan-04-2007 17:40:

The Epic Battle

O�er the valley don the foggy haze fell, Yes a battle would be held this day. Not o�er freedom or peace, not o�er citizenship or even love.

This battle, epic as a battle could be was o�er satisfaction.

Two sides were never so evenly matched as these two who ruled over the valley don.

On one side King J-O-N, a ravishing blue eyed chap, thought he had the answer for supreme satisfaction.

Then his rival, evil prince Car-Ney, who thumbed his nose at the fair king.

So on this foggy morning, the two leaders lead their two forces to line the hill tops along the valley don.

King J-O-N rode through the streets and called his followers to the fight.
�Line up your troops, we�re going to war!�

Car-Ney, quieter by nature took his battle position knowing he had the secret weapon at hand.

And there they stood, two armies, united in desire, divided in belief.

King J-O-N rode his horse to the middle and his troops followed.

Car-Ney�s evil minions began to charge inwards, but low and behold J-O-N had a trick.

A giant flag he raised, which stopped the forces of Car-Ney dead in their tracks.

For the flag had a checkered pattern so beautiful it had frozen them.

This was their satisfaction.

It appeared as though the king had won for there was little movement amongst Car-Ney�s troops.

But low and behold the prince himself remained standing.

From his pocket he pulled a ghetto blaster, black with gray speakers that matched the sky, and suddenly everything stopped.

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-updated, almost there people, how will the epic battle end?
only the orange needs to still be translated


Posted by shanny on Jan-04-2007 17:43:

Yipsh Ohhhhhh Mocavi

Oversly yipsh snipes gerdernit yipsh condoooctor nocozey yeahyeahyeahyeah, Translate a mocavi polkadot francicmcdermoot oxynocor woly iliadano. Jerkeyll oversly brilli ill structed, jerkeyll oversly excor ill whattheef oh.

Woly mocavi, ohhhhhh mocamba zinglackalack mocavi friskipi francicmcdermoot polish oversly thil.

Two asin util fanken r geino li mocamba oposhT two gran yerp over yipsh snipes gerdernit.

Ber ourfs golus Franklin LONKER-YASSLEY-ONOMATOPROPRIA, zinglackalack thultrip Frankalatio rosey elwfegoooo, frankenmouth roughnel guilooteen yipsh zeneinweger truelh jesuish thil.

Yog yu seak, concepted yugh Arti-Tyip, gran moly yu quezney anchiesco yipsh fuew franklin.

R ber woly condoooctor yipper, yipsh two avgockin rasmutin yoksh two hypothermial goosage setrin yipsh trillian asankat mcgregor yipsh snipes gerdernit.

Franklin LONKER-YASSLEY-ONOMATOPROPRIA werseyn joly yipsh uilllnin frugs fortonalopsis yu itish goosage yipsh yadayadayada.
�Setrin iota verbatum hip, itarian rewer goosage war!�

Arti-Tyip, gully boxingship nature hello yu mocavi position spanish roughnel guilooteen yipsh wer sausage anchiesco surr.

Frugs ikish holy aaaa, two frailness, julin ya qra, anak ya farfenugan.

Franklin LONKER-YASSLEY-ONOMATOPROPRIA werseyn yu horse goosage yipsh ma frugs yu hip nustyle.

Arti-Tyip�s concepted wesliz gymungous goosage Ok6 yrrr, arleng ee frugs catastromic LONKER-YASSLEY-ONOMATOPROPRIA guilooteen zinglackalack rap.

Zinglackalack granger neauspilling roughnel poir, restitutal wrrrr yipsh hypothermial I Arti-Tyip wesley ya yoksh cock.

Truelh yipsh neauspilling guilooteen zinglackalack reze ising r scromptralescent inkip guilooteen twoshy quell.

Woly polish yoksh thil.

Inkip supernal mocamba golly yipsh franklin guilooteen polka truelh ikish polish tulipismo bovuley santeeno Arti-Tyip�s hip.

Arleng ee frugs catastromic yipsh yugh grank ous ruin.

Brill yu illingbop roughnel tuniper zinglackalack lovean sunction, youregonnahavtagivemeacoupleminutes polk tomhy bu poo li yipsh toio, frugs we sovernh wrrrr.

Yipsh franklin�s scromptralescent reze neauspilling yeahyeahyeahyeah rrrrrrr mocamba yipsh uininity yos I Quep werty yultz I yipsh sunction.

Hip ber fortioni asin gooo virgo frugs Franklin LONKER-YASSLEY-ONOMATOPROPRIA lhiver goosage Yugh Arti-Tyip frugs holy arrrr ya zinglackalack wappe quem sowrong.




Frugs Arti-Tyip ah anchiesco yipsh Franklin frugs ish�

�Vertin suckle moosage fool Quep polish prop!�


Posted by shanny on Jan-04-2007 17:44:

Aaaa - Stood
Ah - Looked
Anak - Divided
Anchiesco - At
Arleng - But
Arrrrr - Embraced
Arti - Car
Asankat - Tops
Asin - Sides
Avgockin � Leaders

Ber - On
Bovuley - Movement
Boxingship - By
Brill - From
Brilli - Freedom
Bu � Speakers

Catastromic - Behold
Cock - Tracks
Concepted - Evil
Condoooctor � Foggy

Dorph � All

Ee - Low
Elwfegooooo - Chap
Excor � Citizenship

Fanken - Never
Farfenugan - Belief
Fool - You
Fortioni - Both
Fortonalopsis - Called
Frailness - Armies
FrancisMcdermoot - Be
Frankalatio - Blue
Frankenmouth - Thought
Franklin - King
Friskipi - Could
Frugs - And
Fuew � Fair

Geino - Evenly
Gerdernit - Don
Golly - Though
Golus - Side
Gooo - Started
Goosage - To
Granger - Giant
Grank - Himself
Gran - Who
Guilooteen - Had
Gully - Quieter
Gymungous � Began

Hello - Took
Hip - Troops
Holy - They
Hypothermia1 � Forces

Ikish - There
Iliadano - Day
Illingbop - Pocket
Ill - Or
Inkip - It
I - Of
Iota - Up
Ish - Said
Ising - Pattern
Itarian - We�re
Itish - Followers

Jerkeyll - Not
Jesuish - Supreme
Joly - Through
Julin - United

Lhiver - Ran
Li - Matched
Lonker - J
Lovean � Ghetto

Ma - Middle
Mcgregor - Along
Mocavi - Battle
Mocomba - As
Moly - Thumbed
Moosage - Told

Neauspilling - Flag
Nocozey - Haze
Nustyle � Followed

Ohhhhhhh - Epic
Oh - Love
Ok6 - Charge
Onomatopropria - N
OposhT - these
Ourfs - One
Ous - Remained
Oversly - O�er
Oxynocor � Held

Poir - Raised
Polish - Was
Polkadot - Would
Polka - Won
Polk � With
Poo - That
Position - Position
Prop � Good

Qra - Desire
Quell - Them
Quem - Filled
Quep - Benny
Quezney � Nose

Rap - Trick
Rasmutin - Lead
Restitutal - Which
Rewer - Going
Reze - Checkered
Rosey - Eyed
Roughnel - He
Rrrrrrrr - Down
R - So
Ruin � Standing

Santeeno - Amongst
Sausage - Weapon
Scak - Rival
Scromptralescent - Beautiful
Setrin - Line
Snipes - Valley
Sovernh - Everything
Sowrong - Grasp
Spanish - Knowing
Structed - Peace
Suckle - I
Sunction- Blaster
Supernal - Appeared
Surr-Hand

Thil - Satisfaction
Thultrip - Ravishing
Toio - sky
Tomhy - Grey
Translate - Yes
Trillian - Hill
Truelh - For
Tulipismo - Little
Tuniper - Pulled
Twosly - Frozen
Tyip - Ney

Uilllnin - Streets
Uininity - Sweet
Util � Were

Verbatum - Your
VertinSee -
Virgo � Dancing

Wappe - Heart
Wer - Secret
Werseyn - Rode
Werty - Poured
Wesley - Dead
Wesliz - Minions
We - Suddenly
Whattheef - Even
Woly 0 This
Wrrrrrr � Stopped

Yadayadayada - Fight
Ya - In
Yrrr 0 Inwards
Yassley - O
Yeahyeahyeahyeahyeah - Fell
Yerp - Ruled
Yipper - Morning
Yipsh - The
Yog - Then
Yoksh - Their
Yos - Rhythms
Youregonnahavtagivemeacoupleminutes - Black
Yugh - Prince
Yu - His
Yules - Nature
Yultz � Out

Zeneinweger - Answer
Zinglackalack - A


Posted by TranceGrooves on Jan-04-2007 21:16:

The king's beautiful checkered flag fell down as the sweet rythms of Benny poured out of the blaster.


lmao ... hahaha


Posted by shanny on Jan-05-2007 04:58:

The Epic Battle

O�er the valley don the foggy haze fell, Yes a battle would be held this day. Not o�er freedom or peace, not o�er citizenship or even love.

This battle, epic as a battle could be was o�er satisfaction.

Two sides were never so evenly matched as these two who ruled over the valley don.

On one side King J-O-N, a ravishing blue eyed chap, thought he had the answer for supreme satisfaction.

Then his rival, evil prince Car-Ney, who thumbed his nose at the fair king.

So on this foggy morning, the two leaders lead their two forces to line the hill tops along the valley don.

King J-O-N rode through the streets and called his followers to the fight.
�Line up your troops, we�re going to war!�

Car-Ney, quieter by nature took his battle position knowing he had the secret weapon at hand.

And there they stood, two armies, united in desire, divided in belief.

King J-O-N rode his horse to the middle and his troops followed.

Car-Ney�s evil minions began to charge inwards, but low and behold J-O-N had a trick.

A giant flag he raised, which stopped the forces of Car-Ney dead in their tracks.

For the flag had a checkered pattern so beautiful it had frozen them.

This was their satisfaction.

It appeared as though the king had won for there was little movement amongst Car-Ney�s troops.

But low and behold the prince himself remained standing.

From his pocket he pulled a ghetto blaster, black with gray speakers that matched the sky, and suddenly everything stopped.

The king�s beautiful checkered flag fell down as the sweet rhythms of Benny poured out of the blaster.

Troops on both sides started dancing and King J-O-N ran to Prince Car-Ney and they embraced in a heart filled grasp.

--------------------------------------------------------------------
-updated, two more lines to go, who wants to finish the epic battle?


Posted by English Rachel on Jan-05-2007 05:12:

AND CARNEY LOOKED AT THE KING AND SAID.....

____ I TOLD YOU BENNY WAS GOOD











Ta Daaaaaa.................


Posted by shanny on Jan-05-2007 14:15:

Well Done! The story in its completed form, I hope it was as rewarding for you reading it as it was for me writting it.

Here it is in all its glorious fullness...

The Epic Battle

O�er the valley don the foggy haze fell, Yes a battle would be held this day. Not o�er freedom or peace, not o�er citizenship or even love.

This battle, epic as a battle could be was o�er satisfaction.

Two sides were never so evenly matched as these two who ruled over the valley don.

On one side King J-O-N, a ravishing blue eyed chap, thought he had the answer for supreme satisfaction.

Then his rival, evil prince Car-Ney, who thumbed his nose at the fair king.

So on this foggy morning, the two leaders lead their two forces to line the hill tops along the valley don.

King J-O-N rode through the streets and called his followers to the fight.
�Line up your troops, we�re going to war!�

Car-Ney, quieter by nature took his battle position knowing he had the secret weapon at hand.

And there they stood, two armies, united in desire, divided in belief.

King J-O-N rode his horse to the middle and his troops followed.

Car-Ney�s evil minions began to charge inwards, but low and behold J-O-N had a trick.

A giant flag he raised, which stopped the forces of Car-Ney dead in their tracks.

For the flag had a checkered pattern so beautiful it had frozen them.

This was their satisfaction.

It appeared as though the king had won for there was little movement amongst Car-Ney�s troops.

But low and behold the prince himself remained standing.

From his pocket he pulled a ghetto blaster, black with gray speakers that matched the sky, and suddenly everything stopped.

The king�s beautiful checkered flag fell down as the sweet rhythms of Benny poured out of the blaster.

Troops on both sides started dancing and King J-O-N ran to Prince Car-Ney and they embraced in a heart filled grasp.

AND CARNEY LOOKED AT THE KING AND SAID.....

____ I TOLD YOU BENNY WAS GOOD

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If anyone would like an autographed copy, let me know and I will mail you one.


Posted by English Rachel on Jan-05-2007 14:20:

with all the work I put into it, I want an autographed copy on gold leaf!


Posted by shanny on Jan-05-2007 14:34:

quote:
Originally posted by English Rachel
with all the work I put into it, I want an autographed copy on gold leaf!


You'll have it by the end of the business day.


Posted by StereoPrincess on Jan-05-2007 15:04:

quote:
Originally posted by shanny

�Vertin suckle moosage fool Quep polish prop!�


we should have just listened.


Posted by shanny on Jan-05-2007 15:44:

quote:
Originally posted by StereoPrincess
we should have just listened.


Carney was right all along, I sure put my foot in my mouth!


Posted by The Highroller on Jan-08-2007 21:41:

Hahaha. Oh man that was awesome Josh. Glad I finally read it. You have outdone yourself with this one.


Posted by rabbitjoker on Jan-08-2007 21:43:

quote:
Originally posted by The Highroller
You have outdone yourself with this one.


Shanny outdoes himself daily.

http://www.shanny.ca


Posted by MKpacha on Jan-08-2007 21:44:

quote:
Originally posted by The Highroller
Hahaha. Oh man that was awesome Josh. Glad I finally read it. You have outdone yourself with this one.



same here... i think i just pee'd myself a little


Posted by English Rachel on Jan-08-2007 21:47:

quote:
Originally posted by rabbitjoker
Shanny outdoes himself daily.

http://www.shanny.ca


my response to him when he sent this to me....

DO YOU ALWAYS KEEP YOUR BALLS SO SHINY?


Posted by StereoPrincess on Jan-08-2007 23:11:

quote:
Originally posted by rabbitjoker
Shanny outdoes himself daily.

http://www.shanny.ca


wonderful!


Posted by shanny on Jan-09-2007 03:44:

Now that people have gotten the enjoyment out of my novellette that I had hoped, I have been able to overcome my deamons and continue my walk in the park.

It goes like this...

...and I walked home from the park.

The End.


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