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Posted by Sand Leaper on May-22-2002 06:30:

quote:
Im going to need some more bro. Those werent even 5 7 5!!! DO OVER!!!

Hey that's not fair!!Many of the Haikus you guys write arent't 5 7 5,(or maybe I've got the rule wrong,in that case,please give an example of how it should look)so why the hell should I be forced to follow those rules like a slave?!!

Posted by Orbax on May-22-2002 06:34:

read cyclopters and mine. thats what they look like. haiku is a concept like the number three. if it doesnt have certain properties it isnt a haiku its just a regular poem

Posted by Orbax on May-22-2002 06:37:

first gear, second gear
the roar of a huge engine
goodbye four banger

jiggling boobies
big silver dollar nipples
a really fat man

there not about girls

man girls are more fun to write about this sux!

~~~Xxx{{{TrancEaddicT Haiku Alliance}}}xxX~~~

Posted by Sand Leaper on May-22-2002 06:42:

OK,so things like "I","It's","to" and so on don't count as a syllable.
That makes sense.But:

quote:

jiggling boobies
big silver dollar nipples
a really fat man

Where's the 5 7 5 rule in here?I'm a bit confused.

Posted by Orbax on May-22-2002 07:22:

its a syllable count not word count

jig a ling boob ies
big sil ver dol lar nipp les
a real ly fat man

clap as you say the word lol

Posted by Sand Leaper on May-22-2002 09:12:

I see..

Ah,so that's how it goes.Well,I guess I'll have to hit you a second time with some haikus,then.Stay tuned for those.

Posted by Orbax on May-22-2002 21:24:

guess what I just did
I kept us on the first page
rah rah shish koom bah

her tongue on her lips
her dress falls to the carpet
a bra on a lamp

~~~Xxx{{{TrancEaddicT Haiku Alliance}}}xxX~~~

Posted by cycloptor on May-23-2002 00:49:

quote:
Originally posted by Orbax
guess what I just did
I kept us on the first page
rah rah shish koom bah

ahahahahahahahahaha... nice....

DALLAS COWBOYS
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
talentless blunders
full of crack feinds and convicts
oh my god, we suck

Posted by Orbax on May-23-2002 00:53:

we need more haiku
without it the world is bleak
so come on TA

a whisper a sigh
her voice humming in my ear
guess what we just did

~~~Xxx{{{TrancEaddicT Haiku Alliance}}}xxX~~~

Posted by cycloptor on May-23-2002 01:05:

quote:
Originally posted by Orbax

a whisper a sigh
her voice humming in my ear
guess what we just did

you guys were fucking....wernt ya ******s!!!!

Posted by Orbax on May-23-2002 01:11:

muah muah muah

~~~Xxx{{{TrancEaddicT Haiku Alliance}}}xxX~~~

Posted by cycloptor on May-23-2002 01:27:

wuzzle wuzzel??

allright, back to the haikus. the first one is about this rich area of hamilton called the "meadowlands" its this new suburb thing... all the kids think theyre black...gross....but entertaining. "green peace" i think is just kind of funny... and disco duck was about this cell phone ad that aired in canada a while back.

GHETTOS OF WEST MEDOWLANDS
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
yo, what up home fry
bust a cap in you white ass
and blame my butler

GREEN PEACE
^^^^^^^^^^^^
sassy molassy
a hungry hungry panda
covered in poo

DISCO DUCK
^^^^^^^^^^^
duck watched by millions
crazy dance sparks consumption
brain oozing from ears

Posted by Orbax on May-23-2002 05:03:

quote:
GHETTOS OF WEST MEDOWLANDS
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
yo, what up home fry
bust a cap in you white ass
and blame my butler

lol!

The rolling grassland
puffy white clouds sit on my
face and so does she

but seriously folks

Chickens in the barn
farmer in his little shack
we are in the loft

~~~Xxx{{{TrancEaddicT Haiku Alliance}}}xxX~~~

Posted by Orbax on May-23-2002 05:04:

can you tell im running out of ideas for the girl-boy and scenic topics

~~~Xxx{{{TrancEaddicT Haiku Alliance}}}xxX~~~

Posted by Sand Leaper on May-23-2002 12:31:

Alright,I re-wrote the previous poems...Check them out,and tell me what you think.Did I get it right this time?

Posted by Orbax on May-23-2002 16:29:

much better except the second one has 6 in the first line!

You may now enter the alliance.

~~~Xxx{{{TrancEaddicT Haiku Alliance}}}xxX~~~

Posted by UWM on May-23-2002 16:52:

Here is my first attempt at a haiku here

Music in my ears
Ecstasy in my body
Can it get better?

Posted by Sand Leaper on May-23-2002 17:46:

Great!!

Yay!!Finally an alliance that Isn't about dj worshipping!! Hopefully Swampy will turn on the sigs soon,so that we won't have to type/copy-paste all the time.Btw,what does our banner look like?

��------>TrancEaddict Haiku Alliance<------��

Posted by cycloptor on May-23-2002 21:24:

MINI CARROTS
^^^^^^^^^^^^
tasty orange niblets
found in eriks treasure box
shape of genitals

ahhh inside jokes

Posted by SmellsExcellent on May-23-2002 22:01:

rejoice: sigs are back
expression now in effect
my favorite thing

wheres that banner at??? for the allinace...

-m

Posted by mos man on May-23-2002 22:14:

I will post the url for our banner tomorrow when I sort it out, btw, would you rather prefer an animated gif one like my Vandit Alliance one or a picture sig ?

Posted by Orbax on May-23-2002 22:52:

I like pics not gifs

YAY SIGS ARE BACK!

Posted by Orbax on May-24-2002 00:04:

A cascade of trance
ripples through my opened mind
how much E WAS that?!?!?!

Posted by cycloptor on May-24-2002 00:48:

dreaming of comfort
warm thoughts flow through open minds
damn. i wet the bed

Posted by SmellsExcellent on May-24-2002 03:43:

PICTURE!!!! nay hooks on the gifs..

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