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Posted by DJ_Bod on May-24-2002 12:35:

I do too much work
At Valeo Transmissions
Need to get paid more.

I'm at work and I figured that would be appropriate.

Posted by DJ_Bod on May-24-2002 12:41:

Here is a haiku
Hope it satisfys the need
to join alliance..

Can I join yet? LOL

Posted by DJ_Bod on May-24-2002 13:25:

Another work-influenced haiku:

Work is so boring!
I wish I had a sound card,
To listen to trance.

Posted by cycloptor on May-24-2002 16:18:

quote:
Originally posted by DJ_Bod
Another work-influenced haiku:

Work is so boring!
I wish I had a sound card,
To listen to trance.

haha no sound card
no music for you at work
quit your job now, homes

im at work too, stupid people are beginning to take their toll, and its only noon....7 more hours to go.

Posted by DJ_Bod on May-24-2002 16:21:

Damn, Seven more hours?
That is one long ass time, bro.
Ha, I'm out in three.

Posted by TranceSeeker on May-24-2002 18:15:

Life is a game,
Your dick is the STICK,
the woman the JOY...

Posted by Orbax on May-25-2002 05:15:

Yeah GO TRANCE SEEKER
I am a drunk drunk drunk drunk
drunk drunk drunk drunk man

Posted by astroboy on May-25-2002 05:55:

Haiku Alliance membership application

Here is a quick attempt by me:

Walking through the street
The men stop to fix their ties
All we are is dust

and another:

Writing this Haiku
Makes my naughty bits tingle
I know I am weird

Posted by Palivar on May-25-2002 07:57:

Posted by Ravesquad on May-25-2002 10:08:

lets watch the stars fall
sparkling through the atmosphere
soon you will be near

Posted by cycloptor on May-25-2002 12:44:

quote:
Originally posted by Palivar

that is not haiku
in fact, its not even close
please, try it again

Posted by Sand Leaper on May-25-2002 15:03:

More haikus here!

Guess I have to contribute a bit more,too!

RIAA
^^^^^^^
Greedy and money
mad bastards destroy the
pleasure of sharing

FIREWALL
^^^^^^^^^
Melodic beauty
Sizzling beats and basslines
What are these tears doing?

OK,the last line here is a bit too long,but when Orbax can get away with writing:

quote:
Yeah GO TRANCE SEEKER
I am a drunk drunk drunk drunk
drunk drunk drunk drunk man

I think that's alright.

Posted by mos man on May-25-2002 21:27:

Here you go fellas
This is our haiku siggy
Hope you think its cool

(http://www.geocities.com/ministry231184/tranceaddicthaikualliance.txt is the url to use )

Posted by Orbax on May-25-2002 22:11:

1) what the hell is that picture palivar put up
2) I was drunk when I wrote that Haiku (pretty good huh!)
3) That hiaku alliance text doesnt work for me for some reason

Posted by mos man on May-25-2002 23:04:

To get the signiture to work add this to your profile

[*img]http://www.geocities.com/ministry231184/tranceaddicthaikualliance.txt[/img]

But do not include the * which is in the first set of brackets...

Simple as

Posted by Orbax on May-26-2002 01:32:

not workin

Posted by Palivar on May-26-2002 07:14:

Mono - Life In Mono:

The stranger sang a theme
From someone else�s dream
The leaves began to fall
And no one spoke at all
But I can�t seem to recall
When you came along
Ingenue

Ingenue
I just don�t know what to do

The tree-lined avenue
Begins to fade from view
Drowning past regrets
In tea and cigarettes
But I can�t seem to forget
When you came along
Ingenue

Ingenue
I just don�t know what to do

Ingenue
I just don�t know what to do

Ingenue
I just don�t know what to do

Ingenue
I just don�t know what to do

Ingenue

lyrics courtesy of http://www.bb.8m.com/sarkisoz/mono.html

Posted by cycloptor on May-26-2002 07:42:

hmmm...the sig dosent appear to be working for me either... on another note...what the hell is palivar posting??

Posted by cycloptor on May-26-2002 07:43:

never mind... it works now... i am dumb

Posted by Palivar on May-26-2002 07:51:

moby - porcelain

In my dreams I'm dying all the time
As I wake its kaleidoscopic mind
I never meant to hurt you
I never meant to lie
So this is goodbye
This is goodbye

Tell the truth you never wanted me
Tell me

In my dreams I'm jealous all the time
As I wake I'm going out of my mind
Going out of my mind

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
lyrics courtesy of http://www.moby.org/lyrics/porcelain.html

Posted by mos man on May-26-2002 09:11:

quote:
Originally posted by cycloptor
never mind... it works now... i am dumb

quote:
Originally posted by Orbax
not workin

Posted by Orbax on May-26-2002 21:06:

I guess I wasnt capping IMG ..weird.

You talkin to me?

his face is beauty
because I just got done with
my boot toe of art

fuck with me again
no, seriously do it
when you recover

Last night left me some angst

Posted by cycloptor on May-27-2002 19:49:

quote:
Originally posted by Orbax
Last night left me some angst

...appairently.... last night was great for me though

laying in the dark
under a blanket, with you
no words can describe

Posted by Orbax on May-28-2002 01:57:

These are my basic things of life poems.

sex

our feet caressing
our arms and legs intertwined
it isnt a myth!*

beer

CHUG CHUG CHUG they shout
three beers at once I think, wow
my back teeth afloat

*the female orgasm

Posted by SmellsExcellent on May-28-2002 02:05:

quote:
Originally posted by Orbax
These are my basic things of life poems.

sex

our feet caressing
our arms and legs intertwined
it isnt a myth!*

beer

CHUG CHUG CHUG they shout
three beers at once I think, wow
my back teeth afloat

*the female orgasm

LOL!! nice use of footnoting.. haa..

and Paliver, you posted "Life in Mono".... I love that song even though its kinda wuss, but its awesome at the same time..r eally chilly and laidback..

-m

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