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Posted by DJ_Bod on May-28-2002 17:58:

Here's one I wrote yesterday:

United we stand.
This day to honor our vets.
Memorial Day.

whatcha think?

Posted by cycloptor on May-28-2002 20:00:

quote:
Originally posted by DJ_Bod
Here's one I wrote yesterday:

United we stand.
This day to honor our vets.
Memorial Day.

whatcha think?

GOGOGOGOGOGOGOGO AMERICA!!!!!

ok...all sarcasim aside its a lovely thought to write a poem like that. good stuff.

Posted by Orbax on May-28-2002 20:03:

nice memorial poem

Morality IS
human standards come and go
endless night escapes

Posted by Orbax on May-29-2002 06:58:

We almost got sent
to the never seen page 2
we thank you orbax

Posted by DJ_Bod on May-29-2002 13:33:

Thanks Orbax. We don't want to go to the black hole known as page 2. LOL.

OK Haiku time:

Today I want sleep.
Up for way too long last night.
It's my own fault though.

To have you with me,
Is the only thing I need,
I love you so much.

That last one was for my girlfriend. She's not a TA, but I still love her.

Posted by cycloptor on May-30-2002 17:33:

work sucks hard today
its sunny out, why oh why
dont i run away

Posted by Orbax on May-30-2002 20:25:

With you I am whole
your caress ignites a fire
fingers intertwine

this is for my girlfriend I dont have ...

Posted by Orbax on May-31-2002 01:10:

fingers sliding up
her toes splay out in pleasure
this is the G spot

Posted by SmellsExcellent on May-31-2002 02:00:

quote:
Originally posted by Orbax
fingers sliding up
her toes splay out in pleasure
this is the G spot

is splay a word???

hop into the air
arms outstreched, fingers grab hold
game-winner complete!

-m

Posted by Orbax on May-31-2002 02:04:

v. splayed, splay�ing, splays
v. tr.
To spread

Posted by DJ_Bod on May-31-2002 15:43:

Max Graham rocked the house,
Yesterday in Ann Arbor.
Oh my god.... He RULES!!!!

Posted by cycloptor on Jun-01-2002 22:46:

seldom seen pages
rescues thread from the darkness
cycloptor, you rock

Posted by Orbax on Jun-02-2002 00:00:

light burning my eyes
body frozen in motion
lights plus sex no good

This is in reference to someone turning them on after youre having sex in the dark already. I think sex with the lights ON is the best

Posted by Orbax on Jun-02-2002 22:27:

bump

Posted by cycloptor on Jun-02-2002 22:40:

people, please post here
creativity is fun
let your mind run wild

Posted by displaced on Jun-03-2002 01:00:

something smells like cheeeez...
where is that stench coming from?
oh, its my laundry...

uh oh, time to go do laundry. cy'all.

Posted by Orbax on Jun-03-2002 05:17:

Im losing inspiration! I cant think of anything that isnt girls and paradise!!! AYIIEEE

_Fallen_

the silken thread snaps
A hand falling down down down
the face disappears

Posted by cycloptor on Jun-03-2002 06:29:

quote:
Originally posted by Orbax
Im losing inspiration! I cant think of anything that isnt girls and paradise!!! AYIIEEE

ok....let me be of some help. let these words guide you. paint, nose, meander, brownies, orange, "ultra hub", syntax, the incredible hulk, mayonaise, liverwurst sandwitch, envelope. now go create.

Posted by Orbax on Jun-03-2002 06:42:

you bitch! You create sumfin lol

Posted by cycloptor on Jun-03-2002 23:33:

oh...i'll create.....create i will

incredible hulk
so strong, yet so very green
lots of gamma rays

orange envelope paint
syntax meanders through space
liverwurst sandwitch

hahahahaha.....create i did.... not very well mind you... crap.

Posted by Orbax on Jun-04-2002 00:13:

wiggle my coffee
the neptune of jupiter
cry the color red

Posted by Orbax on Jun-07-2002 01:15:

SAVED FROM PAGE 3!!!

Posted by Orbax on Jun-11-2002 18:20:

I dont even know what page this was on. But haikuers need to post more

The green ant marches
on the mossy leafy ground
why is he so green?!

Posted by Sand Leaper on Jun-12-2002 12:53:

This tread is still alive!!Cool!

BACK TO KRISTIANSAND
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
So I'm home again
Resuming the old routine
Can't wait for summer

Posted by DJ_Bod on Jun-12-2002 15:55:

Dual mass flywheel.....
Why is it you hurt me so?
I am still bleeding.

OK, I have to explain that one. I was taking apart a DMF today (I'm at work) and hit a shapr edge on it, and it gouged the crap out of my knuckle. it just quit bleeding (after an hour)

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