fixed this one up a bit, plz take a listen

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Posted by unclejunior on Jun-06-2003 05:17:

fixed this one up a bit, plz take a listen

i posted this one yesterday, after some valuable feedback, i fixed a few things.

sounds way different (hopefully better). what do you think?

BTW Eugene i think you'll like this one.

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Posted by Eugene on Jun-06-2003 05:27:

Re: fixed this one up a bit, plz take a listen

WOW! Excellent! I'm very impressed.

Hard sounds, yet stylish and pro-sounding.

Well-done. Looking forward to hearing more from you.

Posted by extalin on Jun-06-2003 05:42:

aiight, im taking a listen.. goodness gracious this has some way harsh sounds. im a chill kinda guy so this isnt really my style, but the quality sounds alright. i may have used a different kick drum. its a little repetative to me with that same bass note going the whole time. anyway, i think somewhere you mentioned you are new to this, so its pretty good for just starting out, just too harsh on my ears lol. keep it up, im sure youll do some good stuff.

Posted by nic01445 on Jun-06-2003 05:56:

hmm, not too fond of the kick (i guess there is no pleasing everyone). I must say, i like the percussion in the first version better, but man, that filler (the thing that comes in at 1:51) sound really pwns. The only thing this song needs is a climax. The sounds and style are coming along very nicely, i just think that a nice, big, hard-style climax would suit this track nicely.

Posted by trancefeen02 on Jun-06-2003 17:54:

very nice!

Posted by Jakhira on Jun-06-2003 19:09:

Oh man, some of those sounds...
Def a big improvement from the last one, but two things
I don't like that kickdrum either, with a bass like that (which is wicked btw) I think a tougher, beefier kd would sound better (or maybe it's just me)
The other thing is that it just keeps going a going (kinda like the hardtrance duracell bunny). A breakdown at some point would make it sound better and help provide the needed 'climax'.

Posted by unclejunior on Jun-06-2003 23:18:

quote:
posted by nic01445
The only thing this song needs is a climax. The sounds and style are coming along very nicely, i just think that a nice, big, hard-style climax would suit this track nicely.

quote:
posted by pumaz
A breakdown at some point would make it sound better and help provide the needed 'climax'.

i agree. im going to take a break from this track for a few days and come back with a fresh set of ears to see what i can do. I'll post if and when.

thx