Here's the track I promsied to post: UnderstarS - Waiting (2003 Edit)

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Posted by Dj Ahter on Jul-05-2003 14:45:

Here's the track I promsied to post: UnderstarS - Waiting (2003 Edit)

Ok guys... here's the TRANCE track I promised to post...

IT's called:

UnderstarS - Waiting (Summer 2003 Edit)

For those who remember the original mix which was released at the beginning of March 2003(Also posted on TA)...I tell you this version is much much better...!!!

I'd like to say few things about "Waiting";

First of all, it's a sad track which makes you think about the future and the past in an effective way. What's more; it certainly takes you somewhere else (if you really want to understand it) It's such a track that you can find many more feelings for sure ...

If you want to put it in a genre it's: Uplifting Trance which flows like a progressive track but sounds deep at the same time...

I think it's a nice little track and I'd love to learn WHAT YOU THINK about it !?!
Any comments???

Thanks a lot
Greetz;
Dj Ahter

Posted by Dj Ahter on Jul-06-2003 05:07:

Nobody????

Posted by TranceEuphoria on Jul-06-2003 11:22:

ok...your mix contains some pretty good elements - the piano melody is awesome. Bass and layers remind me a bit on U96 : Das Boot. This mix creates a phantastic atmosphere - but there is also one thing I have to criticize: you should raise more tension during the mix. Keep it up!

Posted by Mr.Mystery on Jul-06-2003 15:00:

Hmm, the kick is way too weak, I can barely hear it.
Also, some of the sounds (the piano in particular) sound way too dry and so take away from the dreamy atmosphere. It could also do with a bit more changes/more stuff going on, it gets a bit tiresome at the end.

It's a good track, though, dreamy and airy... and the piano is lovely even if it is dry

Posted by rqpeyruxvg on Jul-06-2003 15:49:

This track still needs alot of work...the vocals were good at the start and i was like hey this sounds great...the track played on and i started to wonder "When does it kick in " so i turned my bass right up and found a kick because i could only here this bassline. I luv the piano but as Mr.Mystery said i agree with about the effects, some delay and mass reeverb would sound great to match that spacey effect. other than that great job with the percussion and stuff so a lil work and the track would be great.

tezz

Posted by Dj Ahter on Jul-08-2003 17:55:

Hey thank you all...

I'll fix the bass drum thing and the wet (Dreamy piano) as well...FOR SURE...

But I need some help the the TENSION POINT...how?? I just don't know how to do it???
Maybe you could help...there are a hell lot of points I've missed so thank you once again for remainding me those...Right.. A LOT OF WORK !!!

Anymore comments...???
I think I may be able to fix the problems in 2-3day (the ones you've already told)(Problem with the computer)

I'll post it once again for you to critizie..OK????

See you...