OrgaNik - Together we Shine (halo remix)

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Posted by JMF [TrAcId] on Jul-27-2003 19:21:

OrgaNik - Together we Shine (halo remix)

*WORK IN PROGRESS*

I'm moving house in 2 days, and i'm not going to be online for a short while until i get my cable fitted. so i want you people to check out my work in progress, very much a rough cut, and i can see/hear some things which need to be fixed myself, but if you guys can take a listen and give me some comments and idea's - i'm going to have plenty of time to work on this thing until i have my net connection up & running again.

http://homepage.ntlworld.com/stephe...o-remix)WIP.mp3

(BTW - the bass sounding a little out of tune in the second half is one of the things i know to fix )

Posted by JMF [TrAcId] on Jul-28-2003 11:04:

all those views and no replies - thanks a lot people!!

i'm off line for a couple of weeks from tomorrow, and no-one can give me any advice/criticism/feedback at all ???

Posted by Mr.Mystery on Jul-28-2003 11:52:

Is this the same cut you sent me the other day?

Posted by [mart] on Jul-28-2003 12:01:

Not bad - I can't say I have any decent suggestions, but good luck with the move and all that!

Posted by JMF [TrAcId] on Jul-28-2003 12:04:

quote:
Originally posted by Mr.Mystery
Is this the same cut you sent me the other day?

It's different,

longer, more synths, and new percs. still pretty rough though

Posted by ABSYNTH on Jul-28-2003 13:09:

[QUOTE]Originally posted by JMF [TrAcId]
all those views and no replies - thanks a lot people!!
QUOTE]

Boy do i know what that is like

Anyway, the track has got loads of good elements and is looking good, as you said this is a 'work in progress' so the only thing i can see that it needs is beefing up alot in the sound dept, but i think you will do this anyway when it is finished!

Nice work

(p.s. Good luck with the move )

Posted by JMF [TrAcId] on Jul-28-2003 19:25:

cheers for the comments Absynth yeah, you are right, this forum is a tough crowd indeed, but i'll keep working them, hopefuly by the time i get back online this will be finished and highly polished

just hope i can get the sounds i want without any help from my usual mentors

Posted by DJPrototypeX on Jul-28-2003 19:44:

really cool rmx...but that snare/clap is a bit too generic...it doesnt seem to build up to anythin...but bein its just a clip, understandable...this has the possibilty to be great...gotta work on it though...the way u used the piano is great though...thas really cool and builds up the emotion...

Posted by Mr.Mystery on Jul-29-2003 12:24:

I think there might be a slight clash between the bass and the kick... can't be sure, though.