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Posted by dbl on Sep-15-2003 10:25:

white sun - ketoprofen

brand new track

white sun - ketoprofen

there is one thing in the track that i think might need something more.. but i leave that for you to deside... caus i have no idea what to add... hehehehe

now please do some commenting

Posted by Luke Terry on Sep-15-2003 13:45:

downloading

Posted by Luke Terry on Sep-15-2003 14:24:

this is fairly quality i must say

things i would change...
the build comes in far too soon imo and is a bit sombre for the melody, the strings in the break sound a bit flanged/phased incorrectly to me.

however the bass and percs are mint, the melody is quality, the effects are cool, maybe quieten the crash and the leads, this could be mint with some more work, and make the ****** longer

Posted by sooper on Sep-16-2003 00:50:

This is a nice tune! Very melodic & uplifting with a nice driving pumping beat!

I think its missing big FAT hi hats though... ya I miss them a lot while listening to the tune.

great work - keep it up!

Posted by [mart] on Sep-16-2003 10:47:

This is quality - I can't fault the track itself but there does seem to be an excess of bass and a distinct lack of treble that makes for quite a 'muffled' sound.

Posted by Mr.Mystery on Sep-16-2003 10:49:

Also, everything seems to be recorded at a slightly too loud volume...

Posted by dbl on Sep-16-2003 11:34:

quote:
Originally posted by MaRt
This is quality - I can't fault the track itself but there does seem to be an excess of bass and a distinct lack of treble that makes for quite a 'muffled' sound.

think i made the misstake to turn up the bass some before i rendered it... so i will turn it down a little bit...

you might be right too mystery... will turn it down.. sometime hehe

and thank's for the comments

Posted by JohnOC on Sep-16-2003 12:28:

gonna download the revised version

Posted by dbl on Sep-17-2003 11:12:

quote:
Originally posted by JohnOC
gonna download the revised version

hehehe.... ok... i'm working on it