my first trance track.. can i get some feedback?

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Posted by acell on Dec-15-2003 05:18:

my first trance track.. can i get some feedback?

Hello all!!

Welp. Usualy i write hard trance but i was in a trancy mood so i remixed one of my hard trance/hard style trakcs into a sort'a prog sounding trance track..

This is the first time i've done this and i would love some feedback from you lovely people

it's called moment of clairty (sunday mix) and you can get it from http://www.djdeux.tk

thanks for your time guyz

Posted by hey cheggy on Dec-15-2003 05:27:

Yeah man, this works. The beginning is a bit boring but gets better once your bassline comes in. The lead works really well with the melody too. The pad is a bit too overpowering though, it covers up the lead too much.

Good job though. I like this track.

Posted by acell on Dec-15-2003 05:34:

dam! thanks for your quick reply.. taken not of what you've said.. thanks for listerning

Posted by moth on Dec-15-2003 06:09:

Thats pretty awesome for a first trance track.

Um, ditch those ugly double claps though.

Posted by acell on Dec-16-2003 21:59:

hehe.. i'll look into thoes claps.. anyone else have any feed back?

Posted by Sean Walsh on Dec-16-2003 22:06:

Comments as I listen:

-Nice Pads.
-Kick could be way louder.
-Basslines doesn't stick out very much.
-Yeah, Pads are way louder than everything else.
-Bassline sounds out of key at one of its lower notes.
-Lead is the best part of the track, but it sounds like a really big mess after buildup. Entire track needs some seriously remastering.

Overall, this has potential but there are a lot of production details that need to be cleared up.

Posted by Lepric0rN on Dec-16-2003 22:13:

yeh

sweet and steady start. for a first slowtrance song its amasing.. continue and im sure you get a great Dj future.. the song gets bether and bether after 5-6 min its marvellous

great work pal

Posted by acell on Dec-16-2003 22:13:

thanks for your feedback dj-sean,

listerning over it again i agree with you.. does need mastering.. thanks for the feedback

Posted by Sean Walsh on Dec-16-2003 22:23:

Oh yeah, I forgot to mention that I really liked the arrangement of melodies, hence why I think the track has a lot of potential, hehe. Try to listen to it right after a pro tune and compare the way it all sounds.

Posted by acell on Dec-16-2003 22:24:

Lepric0rN,

i'm glad you liked it man! Yeah.. it is my first slow trance track.. everything i've been working on has been hard trance so this is new ground for me.. i want to role the 2 sounds together and come up with something like flutlicht.. but a little harder but as melodic..

thanks for listerning man.. much apreciated