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Posted by shahar_own on Dec-20-2003 23:18:

well here's sample to my work :)

Its a good sample 192kbs
i made it with Fruity Loops

The track ian't finished Bcoz my PC crushed with all my tunes

The tune name is: Cyxes - Pure Rotter

http://www.hamula.co.il/Files/7390/...2B1BA8EAC1}.mp3

P.s. sorry about the bad eglish

what do you think about it?

Posted by EternalMusic on Dec-21-2003 00:06:

Hi !

The melody is nice, even though i would change a few notes in some parts of the melody. The main idea is ok, however i can barely hear the bass, the kick is also very weak... Well you are a new producer, keep playing with the frutiy and you'll see some better results in the future! Use VST's & some external samples for the kick and synths, the builtin synths+kicks which the Fruity has to offer realy suck . Anyway, this sample of you'rs has a potential .

Cheers.

Posted by shahar_own on Dec-21-2003 00:20:

quote:
Originally posted by EternalMusic
Hi !

The melody is nice, even though i would change a few notes in some parts of the melody. The main idea is ok, however i can barely hear the bass, the kick is also very weak... Well you are a new producer, keep playing with the frutiy and you'll see some better results in the future! Use VST's & some external samples for the kick and synths, the builtin synths+kicks which the Fruity has to offer realy suck . Anyway, this sample of you'rs has a potential .

Cheers.

thank you m8

wich VSTI software you recomend?

Absynth?

Posted by allstar on Dec-21-2003 00:57:

Hey..

First off, the lead is too loud. Drowns out the rest of the mix.

The percs from what I can hear, sound pretty cool.

Bassline.. well is there one?

The lead sound itself I think could work. The melody... well, I like the first few bars, but I don't like the way it progresses. Work on it a bit more

Also, things are somewhat repitive, try and introduce some more variation.

Posted by shahar_own on Dec-21-2003 04:21:

quote:
Originally posted by MK-S
Hey..

First off, the lead is too loud. Drowns out the rest of the mix.

The percs from what I can hear, sound pretty cool.

Bassline.. well is there one?

The lead sound itself I think could work. The melody... well, I like the first few bars, but I don't like the way it progresses. Work on it a bit more

Also, things are somewhat repitive, try and introduce some more variation.

heyaaa who's here
first of all this TUNE:
Haak - Frenzy(MK-S remix) love it man! GJ here

now.. like i sad my PC crushed so its not the final version of my track :\

its the first thing i did..
then iv'e made some fixse's (like bass)
also, i have made some changes in my melody
but all gone now

thank you for your reply man

but i cant work on this any more :\
i dont have the samples of this tune . . .
and my PC is very week
p3 600 mhz..
my sound card is Creative 128 Vibra (20$)

so. . . thats y i dont have good quality in my works:=\

P.s.

if you want you can do remix for that

Posted by shahar_own on Dec-21-2003 09:30:

quote:
Originally posted by DJ ZERO
not a bad melody u got there, thought the mastering is quite off.
u can bareley hear the bass and the kick is pretty weak.

i would recomend the Superwave P8 VST (its free - search for it in google)
and the novation v-station, i dont know where u can find that - just look around somewhere.

man, would i be able to remix this track?

i will try your VSTI's thank you..

and sure you can do remix :]

the name of this tune is

Cyxes - Pure rotter

Posted by DJ-Kreing^^ on Dec-21-2003 10:15:

If thats your first work then i must say it isnt that bad...
When i started producing, the stuff i made sounded alot worse than your work.
Melody is pretty cool

Alittle hebrew here:

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FM7

Good luck with your future productions!

Posted by shahar_own on Dec-22-2003 17:49:

quote:
Originally posted by DJ ZERO
hey, would u be able to email the midi of the tune (emails in my sig), pm me if u dont know how to make midis in flp.

like i sad m8 i dont have nothing left of this
my hard drive deleted all my works

Posted by shahar_own on Dec-22-2003 17:50:

quote:
Originally posted by DJ-Kreing^^
If thats your first work then i must say it isnt that bad...
When i started producing, the stuff i made sounded alot worse than your work.
Melody is pretty cool

Alittle hebrew here:

��, �� , �� , �� , �� .
��
FM7

Good luck with your future productions!

thank you i will try to get your VSTI allso :}