My 1st releasable track!!! Fyrious - Caramella.. [DD]

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Posted by SgtFoo on Jan-02-2004 23:13:

My 1st releasable track!!! Fyrious - Caramella.. [DD]

This is officially my first track that's good enough for release and actual promotion of. Please let me know what you think.

It's hosted on soundclick, so you may need to visit the webpage to get the mp3.

Fyrious - Caramella (mp3)
OR
Live stream it... sometimes easier... Fyrious - Caramella Hi-fi
AND
Lo-fo Stream - Fyrious - Caramella

and the Fyrious page for all the tracks...

Fyrious (on soundclick.com)

Thanx for listenning!!

Posted by SgtFoo on Jan-03-2004 01:38:

aaawww!! common plz!!? so many views, but no listenner reviews?

*bump, bump bump*

Posted by hey cheggy on Jan-03-2004 02:43:

It helps if you provide a link to download.

Direct Download

It's past 2 minutes now and I'm yet to hear a bassline. The synths you use are nice although percussion could be better. The melody is fairly nice but again more presence of the bassline could add definition to the song.

Posted by Massive84 on Jan-03-2004 03:50:

as i listen

kick is to low, lacks power.

clap is ugly, imo, lacks reverb, and don't like the loop.

as cheggy said this lacks base, and useually base is what gives a track a dancing drive i think.

intro is a bit long and boring same synth over and over and takes to long i say.

the break: the synth(detuned one think it is or unsion) don't like the way the volume is automated.

i like the way you bring up the main synth, is very sudden and i like that.

the melody is not bad. not so keen about the crash, don't like the sample. not sharp enough.

add a base is very important in a trance track i think. make the intro a bit intresting and some percussion change should do it.

Posted by Syeker on Jan-03-2004 04:35:

Hearing it now. I'm gonna have to go with Massive84 the kick is kind of low and the clap could use some reverb but i like the melody is damn beautiful. I like the way you enter the lead in the 2:00 mark but add some delay to it. In the 6:08 mark sounds to sudden the way you stop pretty much everything (you could use filter here).

Keep up working you'll get were you're going

Posted by _Marco_ on Jan-03-2004 15:51:

the melody is pretty interesting as the synth works in general but yea the percussions (especially the clap) & the bassline are very basic here.
well it needs improvement imo but it also has potential