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Convex - Dark Loops (Original Dub Mix)
alrite people
well its been a while since ive posted some stuff on here so i thought id add up my latest track im working on
its in 192!
darkish and bangin!
this is still in progress so i know the mastering etc is "a bit" off lol
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but any feedback would be great
cheers
Martin
+*+*+ Dark Loops +*+*+
interesting, a track by dave, remixed by martin, will download when i can be arsed 
Typical bangin stuff from yourself. Love that sound you got when it breaks down at 2:58. I think it could benifit from a dark but simplistic melody - and don't give me the "I can't do melodies excuse".
Liking what you have done though... ![]()
think this would do well in a club. Here at home it's just a tad dull, especially for the first minute. Something like a little quirky non-melodic (so rhythmic
) synthsound, that can get tweaked throughout the track would make it more interesting I'd think.
but not bad
not bad martin, no bad at all. 
have you been working on it since you registered? 
sounding a bit innovative 
alot of drums and perc, sounds kewl
though, something is missing.. perhaps the kick is to "hard-trancey" or pads, or some kind of loop with notes etc?
dunno
nice producing

cheers for the comments guys!
yeah the tracks no where near finished yet, still working on a rhythm and synth to put to it yet (always seems to be the last thing!)
this is just a basic idea of where the track is going really
ill take into account some of your constructive criticism, hey tech hows the smack habit going? junkie fuck
any more comments 
i'll voice another comment......
Martin, do you think being born a smack baby has hindered you music making skills in anyw way ?
also, were u at IO on nye u fucking ****?
thanks
Stu 
i was at IO NYE but was rather intoxicated!
very percy, dark tribal stuff.
good mastering etc.
i like it, not really much to say yet will have a good listen when i get some time mate.
Keep it up!
Tezz
cool tezz mate
cheers for having a listen to it, i look forward to a more detailed reply
anyone else?!
nice, percs sound very clear, but as everyone said a little bit of a melodic element (or a dull synth) could improve it. or if you want to keep it as an exclusively percussive track, try a bit more variation, or even some wild filtering to make it stand out
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| Originally posted by paranoik0 nice, percs sound very clear, but as everyone said a little bit of a melodic element (or a dull synth) could improve it. or if you want to keep it as an exclusively percussive track, try a bit more variation, or even some wild filtering to make it stand out |
Good job.
cheers for the comments people
much appreciated
im currently in the process of updating the song at the moment
added another synthy picotto esque sub bass to give it more BOOM
working on a sub melody to counter the sub bass
and thinking about adding a little vocal snippet if i can find the right one lol
and as for the filtering im getting some tips on that as we speak
cheers lads!
any more?
I keep getting a bloody 'too many users connected' message whenever I try to download it.
Ah well, i'll keep trying. 
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| Originally posted by arctic I keep getting a bloody 'too many users connected' message whenever I try to download it. Ah well, i'll keep trying. |
Unable to download it; will review when I'm able.
ok havinf some trouble ATM with the hosting
too many connections or something :S
just a quick update, song is almost finished added a rhythm synth to give it more groove so ive just to master that now
and still considering the little vocal snippets but havent got any i like ATM so i may just stick with no vocals
ill post up the new version for some reviews when the host has cooled down a bit lol
martin
Ah, sounds better Martin! Lovin the melody you have there now - suits the style of the track perfectly, and it seems to keep the track flowing more.
Er... Good improvement! 
Like the thought of anything dark and bangin' wasn't able to hear it though... will try again later. 
Cheers
Nem
First off, thanks for the help mate, you 2 Luke
The track is sounding well, the new riff is holding its own but i think like and some have pointed out that it needs some kind of melody to finish it off! Mastering is really clean, sweet sound.
Keep workin on that hook and you could have a top track here and if i was you i would be sending it 2 ID+T
Good job mate!
Duncan
cheers for the review dunc
ok people now just getting the hosting fixed so i can upload the updated version and get som more feedback 
upload very soon
Excellent track really like this.
Fair play
cheers bryan
like i say the update will be up ASAP so hopefully itll add something more to the track 
alrite people
newest update of this
well so far ive added a bit of a dark hook to the track, hope you like it
still working on some FX for the track, cant get what i want and having limited time to do it doesnt help
let me know any more views 
cheers people
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