[club] Pjotr G feat. Shyenne- Trapped (in my Desire)

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Posted by Pjotr G on Jan-18-2004 21:39:

[club] Pjotr G feat. Shyenne- Trapped (in my Desire)

Hello

After a lot of messing around, here is a new track. Club this time, made possible by a singer of this forum big up!

Download:
http://homepage.uvt.nl/~s216887/sam...e_-_Trapped.mp3

What do you think?

Posted by TOR on Jan-19-2004 16:17:

good stuff, lovely groove.. wicked percussion!
i like the vocals as well.

i'm missing a good bassline, though..
the track lacks a bit of depth, if you know what i mean.. it's a bit too "light".

Posted by Pjotr G on Jan-19-2004 17:03:

there's a bassline (from carlos santana - black magic woman), but overall the mix maybe could've used more bass...bit more mid, bit less high. Also I've heard that a "hook" is missing, so may look into all that some time.

Thanks for the review (finally somebody!)

Posted by Fundamental on Jan-19-2004 19:08:

quote:
Originally posted by tor8024
good stuff, lovely groove.. wicked percussion!
i like the vocals as well.

i'm missing a good bassline, though..

Totally agree with what's been said here. You just need a massive groovy bassline too finish it off nicely.

Posted by Sean Walsh on Jan-19-2004 23:10:

Really nice intro, great effects and percussions. The kick sounds as though it's a little messed though, as though there's some kind of artifact on the tail end of it. Vocal is dope as hell, but as others have mentioned the bassline needs WAY more presense. I like the groove of it myself, just needs to fit in the mix properly.

Posted by Jay M on Jan-20-2004 23:09:

quote:
Originally posted by dj-sean
Really nice intro, great effects and percussions. The kick sounds as though it's a little messed though, as though there's some kind of artifact on the tail end of it. Vocal is dope as hell, but as others have mentioned the bassline needs WAY more presense. I like the groove of it myself, just needs to fit in the mix properly.

Yeah, Sean, drive me mad whith the "artifacts"! I'm sorry, couldn't find it once more... For the rest of it, I totally agree!!

About the vocal:
Wie is die meid die voor je zingt?! Ik kan ook wel zo'n lekkere stem gebruiken, klasse!

Though the bass should be some louder, I love these groovy sounds. This should be the dubby version, add some more grooves and club you go!

Posted by Waxen on Jan-20-2004 23:47:

I am that girl Jay M

Posted by Jay M on Jan-21-2004 00:42:

Well, if that's sooo.. Love your voice, mom!
It really spices the groove! Do you have more of work of yours online?

Posted by mef on Jan-21-2004 00:46:

cool track. real deep.

Love that groove...