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St John vs Locust - Mind Circles (Antarctic Remix)
the song is finished
http://emoticons.johnsteenbergen.co...rctic_remix.mp3
feedback is welcome
renco
hee renc, sounds goodbut you should make the kick stronger. and the bassline is too loud i think. also you need a lot more percussion. and add some pads towards the end of the build up or something. plus some fx
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hee renc klinkt goed hoor je moet alleen de kick harder maken en de bassline is te hard denk ik. ook moet je veel meer percussion derin doen. en wat pads naarmate de opbouw verder is zeg maar. en der moge ook wel wat extra synth layers in en wat leuke fx dinge
john
here's a new sample of my remix...
http://emoticons.johnsteenbergen.co...rctic_remix.mp3
renco
yeah its better now, still feel some bits are a bit empty but it a big improvement
Sounds good. I loved the original and this is a beautiful version. Anyway you kept me craving for more when it came to an end so i want a final version.
thnx for feedback John
and thnx for your reply Syeker
i'll finish it as soon as possible.
anyone else??
The song is finished
http://emoticons.johnsteenbergen.co...rctic_remix.mp3
renco
Sounds pretty nice, you need to work on the "wideness" of some sounds though.
not a bad remix at all. good stuff
Still like the remix but it always kept me wishing for more energy that the one it already had. Nice remix gonna write it on my sign 
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Nice remix, keep up the good work 
www.djstjohn.co.uk
I like this but I still feel the kick could do with some more power. Perhaps change the sample all together.
As Teknikol said, you need to work on the wideness of some of the sounds. Try using a bit of delay and some Stereo enhancer, usually makes a sound come across much better.
I also think that the use of pads playing chords would make a whole world of difference to this track as I noticed it doesn't really have anything like that at the moment. That would help you get that really lush, wide open space feeling. Chords and chord changes are also one of the major drivers in terms of a tracks energy.
Keep up the good work man!
Cheers
Nem
Thnx for the comments Nemesis44, CHOMPER, Syeker, Teknikol and St John of course!
Good sounding track but I think its missing a Big Pad or Lead, something to make it stand out, but never the less, good stuff.
Keep it up!!
Like most have said - keep working on this track. It feels a bit incomplete, and I think a few things need to be added to make it sound 'full', and 'wide'.
thnx for your reply ManTrance and tranzMental, i'll work on my remix
renco
great work so far, lots of potential, but as many have said, its missing something, sounds a little empty, a little hollow (sounds somewhat like an instrumental almost at this point). Maybe add some deep sound in the background to flesh it out, give it sort of a filled out feeling to it, and maybe toss in a pad or lead or something to liven up the other end of the spectrum to complete it. keep up the good work =)
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| Originally posted by DjCommisad great work so far, lots of potential, but as many have said, its missing something, sounds a little empty, a little hollow (sounds somewhat like an instrumental almost at this point). Maybe add some deep sound in the background to flesh it out, give it sort of a filled out feeling to it, and maybe toss in a pad or lead or something to liven up the other end of the spectrum to complete it. keep up the good work =) |
I change the sound of the leads, the kick and some other sounds. I hope it's better now.
Download here
Renco
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