number 37 with steamed rice - Just Because

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Posted by Kristoph on Jan-28-2004 01:50:

number 37 with steamed rice - Just Because

still needs a lot of cleaning up / EQing etc... but let me know what you think cheers

http://kristoph.org/just-mixdown3.mp3

Posted by EternalMusic on Jan-28-2004 15:11:

Hate to see a thread without replys

Back to the topic, i like it to 3:00, it sounds abit empty after. I dont like the melody, it has something in the background, a missplaced note i believe. Keep workin on it.

Cheers.

Posted by Darrax on Jan-28-2004 15:49:

It was nice until about 3:15, the bass went down a few notes and sounded really out of place. I really think you take a look at that.

Apart from that I like it, what did you make it on?

Only just noticed your from Sheffield too...class.

Darrax...

Posted by Kristoph on Jan-28-2004 18:07:

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Originally posted by Darrax
It was nice until about 3:15, the bass went down a few notes and sounded really out of place. I really think you take a look at that.

Apart from that I like it, what did you make it on?

Only just noticed your from Sheffield too...class.

Darrax...

cheers for your comments, I use logic for sequencing, main synth's coming off V-station, percussion from stylus... used trilogy and atmosphere and a few other instruments in there somewhere....

aye I'm sheffield born & bred

Posted by Kristoph on Jan-30-2004 03:00:

new mixdown at the address above... fixed a few things

Posted by BassAngel on Jan-30-2004 12:54:

Review as I listen:

Nice sound - listening to the build right now, very 'clicky' bassdrum though imo, keeps distracting me from the rest of the mix and what's going on.

People have told me I need more transition FX in my tunes and I think this could do with it too - just to break up the build a bit to keep the sense of movement I guess.

My work mate has just said "That's nice" from his work regarding the chords and I agree - nice unusual chords you got there mate. Sound is good at this point and got my interest.

Building back up - Can hear things clearly from where I'm sitting

When you drop in the Shhp I was expecting more shuffles and a build to the rhythm - something more at this point. Like the higher notes over the top.

My thoughts are very good production job, nice track, nice chords, it just needs a bit of variation re: shuffles/transitions as mentioned above - a bridge or something so you forget the main tune and then get back to it wouldn't hurt either.

Nice work!